A quick favor for Sonata after school hours is repaid threefold.
Glad to see this story continuing. The scenes were hot.
Idly wondering when Adagio's going to get involved. Enjoying what's there so far, but would like to see how he handles a foursome.
Great chapter, but there's a minor thing you may want to edit.
Without stopping to consider, you stick you finger in your mouth, coating it with saliva.
That should be "your".
Eating her out now would be almost the same as sucking your own dick.
This had me rolling on the floor
And if it doesn’t work out, there’s not a downside. You’ve got Aria sitting on your face
I don't think he need to worry about that both Aria and Sonata is enjoying themselves so I'm sure they're going to come back for some more
My boner....it hurts...
This was a awesome chapter I can't wait.to see what happens next.
well then
5574155
There goes my English classes. I edited most of this chapter. Few of them slip by me.
Without stopping to consider, you stick your finger in your mouth, coating it with saliva.
i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/744/909/36d.gif
5682614 Just found one other minor thing.
Once you've reached a perfect tempo, you let go of her hips and start to run you fingers over he back, feeling her muscles tense and relax as she eats Sonata out.
"her".
Instead, you bury our face
your
Glad to see this story continuing. The scenes were hot.
Idly wondering when Adagio's going to get involved. Enjoying what's there so far, but would like to see how he handles a foursome.
Great chapter, but there's a minor thing you may want to edit.
That should be "your".
This had me rolling on the floor
I don't think he need to worry about that both Aria and Sonata is enjoying themselves so I'm sure they're going to come back for some more
My boner....it hurts...
This was a awesome chapter I can't wait.to see what happens next.
well then
5574155
There goes my English classes. I edited most of this chapter. Few of them slip by me.
i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/744/909/36d.gif
5682614 Just found one other minor thing.
"her".
your