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ErraticOverlord


But, if ErraticOverlord is dead, why the empty grave?

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Floret is a filly attending the Canterlot School for Gifted Unicorns. Every day, she tells the camellia flower she grew out of a seed as her entrance exam about her troubles and every day after the troubles are gone. A bully pushed down the stairs. A teacher getting sick. What is going on in the school and who is the pony dealing with Floret's enemies in lethal ways?

Submission for Weekly Contests story contest #14 botany and plants.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

... well, I have to say, It's good... know what? I gonna do a review about this. what do you think?

5392853 I think go for it! I would love to see one. :twilightsmile:

That.. was disturbing.:twilightoops:

5596831 Disturbing good or disturbing bad?

5597885 A little bit of both, I guess..

5599265 Well, I usually don't like dark or gore stories, and it kinda ticked me off that there was little to no explanation on why the plant was evil. But nevertheless, it was a good story that I enjoyed reading.

5599442 Was the plant evil? Or was the plant helping Floret? In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

This story was very interesting! I'm glad I found it, however I did spot a few errors:

She calls my Flo-wet instead of Floret and she told everypony that the faculty had to get a cleaning crew up here...

That should be me.

"What would that make, Camellia then? What seed did he get?"

The comma should be moved to after Camellia.

Viper Tongues room

That should be Viper Tongue's. I'd also suggest you add a mystery tag to better reflect the story. :twilightsmile:

7180579

Thank you for reading! The edits you suggested have gone through, and I appreciate your taking the time to write them out.

Have a good one!

9654339
Wow, old comment! And you’re welcome!

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