Fire wakes up in the middle of a forest with no memory and makes his way to Manehattan. This story follows his life in the gang The Sky Kings and all his wacky adventures. Will include bank robberies, shady characters, and gang violence.
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I have to say,
Pretty short like... I guess chapters.
But I like the format
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If you don't like please tell me why..
. That way I can improve.
519929
Well there really isn't that much to critique on...
It's really short [2 chapters = 1000]
A good chapter should be close to 1000 by itself :I
520375
Is the story line good? Is the flow good?
520638
It's not the greatest, but it's better than a wall of text of 2nd person dialogue
520647
Sorry about that. It's really my first fanfic... ever.
520655
Don't be sorry. Instead try being assertive
Iron Will: and instead have pride in what you type
520690
Ok. Thanks.
I don't see what the problem is with short chapters. Isn't it the author's decision as to where to devide his writing?