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Darknight293


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(One-shot fic inspired by a picture, it's description, and Christmas- I mean Hearth's Warming magic!)
(Notice: considered to take place after Rainbow Rocks so yes Sunset is reformed.)

After a long and exhausting morning, you donned your winter clothes and headed to a Canterlot cafe to meet up with your girlf- marefriend Sunset Shimmer for a Hearth's Warming lunch.

(Credit for the artwork, and possibly story idea, goes to rivalcat on Deviantart. Proof of her ownership for the artwork and her existence.)

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Comments ( 28 )

5425578 5425592 5425747 Glad to see you guys liked it!

Oh, look. I'm that guy.

This was pretty awesome! :pinkiehappy:

Also, I found some typos,

You never went their again till your first date with Sunset.

It's "there".

You own years escape your eyes as the nervousness is replaced with an unexplainable about of joy and happiness!

It's "tears".

(Sorry if this is annoying, I'm a real stickler for fixing typos)

5426752 No I'm very glad you did this! My little sis is a good proofreader but not even she can catch them all.

5426814 That's good, a lot of times when I find typos for other users, they get really annoyed

That was cute. Well done:twilightsmile:

Woot. You've definitely improved a whole lot, since I last saw you. Not bad at all.

It's heartwarming to see a newbie that I met a year ago, write something like this.

Keep up the good work.

Also, I hope you haven't forgot about my existence. :raritywink:

5450967 thanks and I didn't forget you at all, my face lit up a bit when I saw you commented and favorited it!:pinkiehappy:

Nice and fluffy, if a bit short

5476471 My first attempt at a one-shot so yes it's quiet short.:twilightsmile:

I found a couple of things you may want to edit.

You accepted her apologize and you both quickly became good friends afterwards.

That should be "apology".

When you both finish your lunch, your left with a pony leaning into your chest and rubbing her head against you as you scratch her ears.

And that should be "you're".

5482315 Thank you! I'll correct them right now.

Adorable perfection! :pinkiehappy:

5759844
Proud to be a Brony indeed~

Short And Sweet. I Like It.

I love it.

Sweet, loved it. Keep up the noice work 👌

That was just SO SWEET!!! :twilightsmile:

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