Bad Luck

by Skyler101

Chapter 1

"Stop, leave us alone!" A voice screamed

"Aaaarg!" A cream pegasus screamed as a brown stallion pinned her wing under his hoof

"Why should we do that?" One of them smirked "You seemed to have something that belongs to us"

"Please leave us alone, I..I.. don't.. know what you're talking about" The tan mare begged

"Don't lie to us" He smacked her with such force she fell to the floor

"MOM!" The young pegasus yelled trying run to her mother's side but the stallions hoof pinned her down that moving pulled her feathers off

"Where do you think your going?" The stallion smirked stepping harder on her wing harder as she screamed in pain

"I'm going to ask you one more time where is it" The blue stallion started to lose his patients with the mare

"I don't know what you're talking about" She replied trying to stand on her hooves

The stallion smacked her again as blood splattered on the floor "You little bitch, lets see if you speak after your daughter has no wing to fly with" He singled his friends who started to stomp harder on the fillies wing as the bones cracked

"Stop live her alone, I don't know what you want!" She yelled as her daughter screamed in pain "You're lying, handed it over" He stomped on her rib cage in anger as she gasped for air

Tears ran down the her cheeks as the young filly witnessed her mother in pain. She wanted to run to her side but colt held her down her wing went limp as room started to darken around her. "She fainted" the stallion said looking at his friend "Her mother won't be saying anything anymore, its time to go" The blue stallion said as his friend followed after him.

'Whats going on, where am I' The pegasus asked her self

'Jinx' A voice called out

She walked closer to a shadowy figure 'Mom?...'

'Jinx I'm sorry I couldn't protect you' Her mother said 'I'm sorry sweetie' she hugged her daughter

'It's not your fault mom' Jinx hugged her back

'Jinx I have to go' Tears form on her eyes 'I'm sorry sweetie' she petted her head

'Where are you going?... Wait from me... please don't leave me' Jinx rand after her but it seemed that she was getting further away 'please don't leave!'

"Hey Kid can you hear me" A voice called out

'I'm sorry'

"Come on kid stay with us" The voice called out "Were almost there"

'I don't want to leave you' Jinx said

"Can somepony help us!" The voice yelled

'I know sweetie' The tan mare hugged her daughter one last time as Jinx eyes opened a glimpse of a blue coat crossed her eyes. Fear took hold of her as she pushed herself away landing on floor, cringing in pain she slowly backing away as her surroundings seemed to spin.

"Easy kid were trying to help you" The blue mare stepped closer. Jinx took a few steps back as the room started to dracken. "The doctors just want to help" She said as a brown stallion slowly approached them.

"Stay...Away…" she said trembling

Sighing she turned around to talk to somepony "You want to give this a try? I think I'm just scaring her" A yellow mare walked tours Jinx 'She looks like mom' she thought "Mom…."she called out before fainting. "Mom?" the yellow mare said out loud as the doctors carried the filly away.

Comments

[The-Survivor]

Personally I think this was a amazing start you got a good idea of what dark truly is..but my only concern is for jinx I hope it turns out all right for her