Inspired by the song "One Day More" from Les Miserables
Creative Consultant: The Psychopath
Cover Art: frans97
The fic's events begin after "The Mane Attraction", but before "The Cutie Re-Mark". Also Cadance has yet to become pregnant. The reason the map isn't mentioned is because the fic was started before the airing of Season 5 and the official time this fic takes place within the canon wasn't officially decided until March 2016.
Not long after Tirek's defeat, Twilight Sparkle looks back on the Mane 6's victories over entities such as Discord, Nightmare Moon, Sombra, etc. but gets a nagging feeling in her mind: something's missing. Every time she remembers using the harmony powers successfully, she keeps feeling that there was always one part of the magic she and her friends were missing.
Later on, Twilight and her friends are shocked to find out that Tirek has escaped again, but this time, he's not alone. Thanks to his dark magic, he has managed to create an army of his own including with a band of "friends" that rival even the alicorns' powers!
The protagonists discover that the Mane 6's harmony magic isn't enough to defeat Tirek's army; even with the combined might of the other princesses and Discord. So, they decide to reach out to other forces for help.
Who are these new "friends" of Tirek? What does he have in store for Equestria?
Will the Mane 6 be able to unravel this mystery of Twilight's visions? What forces will Equestria call upon for aid?
Take a look, and find out!
An action packed epic containing characters both canon and non-canon!
Very nice start! I like clean Tirek stories, so I'm going to track this!
5386498 Thanks! So, care to take a guess as to who Tirek's new "friends" might be? Also, what did you of Cerberus' heads having three separate names and personalities?
*you're
Don't forget to separate dialogue from paragraphs and sentences.
This was very well elated and developped. It's promising! Best yet, you remind me of myself!
5386637 Thanks! Yeah, I guess that little bugger did manage to slip under my watch.
5386671 Oh, good. You didn't do it on purpose. Best put my skinning equipment away.
5386575 Tirek's friends? Changelings, maybe? As to Cerberus' heads, it reminded me a bit of the two-headed Orc Knights in Warcraft II--how they'd argue sometimes. "We're ready, Master." "I'm not ready!!"
Do his friends look anything like… this!
img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131005233606/villains/images/2/2b/The_Supreme_Fairy_Council.jpg
I thought not.
5387429 You're half right. I'll give you that. When concealed, they're completely wrapped in shadow, but you can still kind of make out what species they are.
*yawns* I'm sorry but I'v faced enemies that make these guys look like harmless ants. Well my OC has at least. Cool story though.
6373898 Thanks for the feeback!
The fights with the duplicate princesses will be in Chapter 4, and Havoc in Chapter 5. Maybe what I have will add a bit more intimidation. If not, that's your opinion. At least you like the story, which is plenty for me!
Full out desolation
6378422 LOL. So, you like what you see so far?
I can't wait for more
6379187
I'm glad to hear that!
Hmm, very interesting. While Twilight's psychosis seems overblown, the rest of it has a nice bit of intregue that keeps me going and want to see wher the rest of this leads.
6381647
The slight OTP psychosis was more for comedic purposes. Especially her constantly usage of the words 'possible' and 'problem'. Plus, if I'm not mistaken, she's never really dealt with a problem like this before.
6381982
So she hasn't, and I know she can. I just felt it went overboard on this one, everything else was in character. I can understand if it was for a joke though, because it did make me laugh.
6382011
Good, then it served it's purpose.
I already see two ways they could win.
6382816
OOH! A theory! This I gotta hear.
6382847
Well I just came up with a third one.
1. They use there enemies' power agents them.
2. They take advantage of Shattered Heart's distrust for the others.
3. Change mach ups. ie: don't take on there counter parts, take on some one else's.
6383020 Interesting. To avoid spoilers, I can't really say if your theories were right or wrong, but I can say that I like your thinking!
6383075
I just came up with two more, but the second one is more wishful thinking than any thing.
6383125
What are they?
6383185
4. All of equestria and the world rise up and lend the princesses there power, or something along thous lines.
5. My OC gets involved and helps in some indirect way. Or they loose to there counter parts and he gets them to safety allowing them to take one of the other options I mentioned.(Like I said wishful thinking)
Nice title
6415157 Thank you!
YEAH FLASH SENTRY IS BEST PONY!!!
Oh my god I so want to be involved in this story. My OC is meant to scene a tip in the scales of the multiverse. This is so amazing hurry up with the next chapter. I want to see Twilight kiss Flash. Hurry before I die!!
6455999 Excellent! I knew that epic Flash Sentry moment with Twivine would give salvation to his character! This is the kind of feedback I was hoping to see! I actually got the idea for the scene from that scene in Harry Potter where Sirius Black punches Lucious after saying "get away from my godson"
Glad you're enjoying it!
Still no new chapters. I've came up with even more things that could have an affect on what could happen in this story.
6589834 College has been taking its toll. It's been tough to get in time to write lately. Sorry for the wait.
Still no update wow collage must be really hammering you right now.
6729456 Some writer's block has been thrown into the mix, but I have been chipping away at it from time to time. My apologies for the long wait.
Don't worry, my goal is to have the next chapter out by Christmas. ;)
6729644
Good to know.
gorgran....er gen 1 monster boss goat thingy
6764610 Grogar. And no, it's not him, but that is a good guess!
So what do you think of the fic?
OMG!!! Another chapter!!! YAY!
The princesses and Discord are out of control!!!
Why Tirek! I'm gonna kill you.
Anyway, awesome job. Still following you!
6764727 Thank you for your support! And Merry Christmas!!
6764862 merry Christmas too!!!
Hmm.... What is more power full than friend ship? OH I KNOW IT'S LOVE!!!!
It's most likely Sombra but could just as well be Groger.
6765001 I'm sure you'll be quite surprised as to who this mystery prince really is!
6764634 Its good.. but im starting to wonder who the allies for the good gals will be i mean if this is the multiverse theres a host of people that would beat down tirek some of them not pony and a few not even flesh and blood... also i had a dream about your story and how just one person could make a differnce in what they say to the heros lol
I love this story so far its really great
MORE!
Dang this place is more secure than the white house after 9/11!\
I wish my OC was in this story.Any way I was really happy to see an update on this story.
7086326
7086296 There will be.
You guys got any questions for the Q+A?
7086833
Could my OC be in this story?
Very nice.:) Now to see how things play out from here.
Oooh, I questionarre, i love it.
Surpisenly, I found it to be well done. You were able to show tha Wpike can learn something without taking anything away from the mane six. (Wich turns me off a fanfic so much.)
Ca;t relay say since I just met them, but they are interesting.
Nope
I think everything worked out pretty well.
Nooooooooooooooooooo! Then if Discy got discorded, then that means, no! No! No! No! I refuse to think that!