Anthro. The following story is about how a lonley and sad immortal princess finds what she wanted the most on one little mortal and about not judging a book for it's cover. For, sometimes things aren't always what one thinks the are. NightxLight and TwixLuna. There might be cloping on future chapters but, I'm not sure. Read, comment, make (constructive) critics... The usual. Hope you all like it. Aditional character tag, Celestia, Other.
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is this for Twilight and the Moon?
5366976 Twilight and the Moon? Is that a contest? I didn't knew ther was one. But no. It's not.
5367686 Twilight and the Moon is a story based on the movie Beauty and the Beast, it was made a week ago, that's why i thought it
5367737 Oh! Yes. I read it. But Iactually had this idea a while ago. I just didn't know hoe to go about it. And, after all the critics and dislikes my other story had, I wasn't confident enough to begin this. But then I thought to myself "What the hell. People like it, good for them. If they don't, too bad. But I'm gonna do this!". After all, the thing that really matters in thatI like and am proud of what I write, right?
5367954 oh ok X3, it's great so far
5369441 Thanks! That's good to hear. I'm plannign chapter two. Only I don't quite know how to being it. I only have pieces of it currently. :p
5369449 how close are you keeping it to the story? if you give Twi sisters then i say Twixie and Sunset would work as her mean sisters
5369455 (sweatdrops) I think you got the wrong story. Heck, did you even read it? My story is a crossover with The Beauty and the Beast. The story that you are talking about is Cinderella. Two completely different stories!
5369526 Beauty had 2 sitters as well or was it 3, when the dad went to go to the city he asked them what they would like the 2 mean sisters wanted jewellery but Beauty didn't want anything but the dad said he had to get her something so she said a rose, that's why he picked a rose and made the Beast angry so he made a deal with the Beast that the 1st living thing he sees will take his place as a prisoner, the dad thought this will be fine as it's the dog that always runs to him but it was Beauty instead so he tells her the deal and said he won't go with it but Beauty says you have to honer the deal so she goes anyway
5369565 The crossover I'm writing is about DISNEY'S Beauty and the Beast!
5370550 ohhhh DISNEY'S never have it like the originals but 9 out of 10 there better ten the originals
I FINALLY posted a new chapter! So, to anyone who wants to read it, go to chapter two.
you gone to Disney, this felt like it was ripped out the movie also the French feem and Japanese feem wasn't a good idea, it was confusing
i think it was better before, it was more your own story back then
6549786 I see. Well, I'll correct the Japanese/French thing right now. Besides, while the setting is the same (it had to be), the dialogs are either, my creation or modified versions of the original ones.
6549786 Done. I chose to stay with the Japanese and out with the French. See if you like it!
6550196 why not set it in Japan to give it more of a twist, you could have the witch a Kitsune as Kitsune are know to play pranks, so a Kitsune turning Luna into a monster would fit that side
i think it's still to Disney, Blue Blood does not make me think Blue Blood, he makes me think Gaston, if you want a Gaston, then i think Twixie would work better as Gaston and Twixie when you 1st meat her do act a lot the same, where Blue Blood is a clean noble that thinks his better then ever one for what he is and not what he brags about, i think Blue Blood can work very well
i also think you shored of have Snips and Snails, i think them taking how Blue Blood is and trying to out do each other till Blue Blood stops them
6550521 Okay... I'll ask you to please improve your english. Because I didn't understood half the things you said.
6552235 Blue Blood isn't Blue Blood, he is Gaston, to march like Gaston.
if you wanted to have someone act like Gaston then Twixie would of been better as when you fist meet her, she acts a lot like Gaston part from hitting on someone.
Twilight is to march like Bell, when you put, "If I am to marry, I want it to be out of love. Not out of convenience." what she shored of said was something like marriage would get in the way of her studding as that's all Twilight wanted to do before she made friends.
what I'm trying to say is, the characters are the Disney characters with different names and that's the biggest problem
6552307 I see. Hmmm... I'll see what I can do. Thank you for bringing this to my attention.
6552744 your welcome, here's something, when Blue Blood is trying to hit on Twi, have him say he's writing about his life that ever one must read, that way it make him look smart, having him smart would take away the Gaston likeness as he's a muscle idiot, where Blue Blood would be smarter but he's still all about me, like he's the best and he deserves the best could stay.
you could also mention Shining Armour, like have Shining fight Nightmare to get his sister back
(note: that's more of an idea to put more my little pony in it as you don't have that march my little pony in it )
6552905 Hmm... The Blueblood thing will go in. But the Shinning Armor thing won't. Besides, I've researched. And Crossovers are supposed to either, different characters in the same setting and roles of the original ones, or same original characters in a different setting. Like, the mane 6 in place of, say, the Teen Titans. Or the Teen Titans being ponified (become ponies) and are transported to Equestria. So, according to my research, my story is within those gidelines.
6553062 the only Crossovers i read was more like the mane 6 where written as if they where from a different story, not a copy and past of a different story with different names
the Shinning Armour was an example