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Well, this feels more like the first chapter of an ongoing fic, rather than a one-shot.

Also, call me crazy, but I really don't think The Stare has that kind of power no matter what.

And for the record, I didn't see any sort of romance stuff in this, so why you have a romance tag really baffels me.

This is adorable. It doesn't really deserve all the hate it's getting but it's going to receive a lot of downvotes because of general consensus dislike of certain things. Well done.

There needs to be a sequel.

This really does need another chapter, the way you just cut us off like that, but I guess you're the author. Still a good story though.

Seriously dude, this is awesome :D. This has alotta potential!! LIke Fluttershy "rebuilding" Gilda's mind so she'll be nicer, or making her believe that Fluttershy is "Momma"

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I include the 'Romance' tag on a lot of my stories because in most cases the 'Slice of Life' tag just doesn't quite encompass everything. The limited selection of tags are helpful with broad sorting, but sometimes fails to summarize the story properly.

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I plan on continuing this story in the future so look forward to that!

3 words "Beware the Flutterstare"

Also i hope you add more to this! :twilightsmile:

(I can't believe I'm even commenting on a story about this topic...)

I just wanted to throw out there that Flutter's sudden almost unprompted rush to gussy up Gilda and treat her so...it doesn't make sense, particularly in her knowing what happened to the poor bird...unless she actually has some experience staring someone's mind out...

So this is the effect a full powered flutter stare, complete memory wipe.

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