"Where are we?" Fluttershy asked, fighting back tears.
They hadn't been gone for more than a minute, but she already missed Twilight and her friends. She thought of her animals all stuck in that tree. Hopefully, someone would be able to get them all down safely. The thought of any of them getting hurt made her want to cry.
"Oh, some random spot in the Everfree Forest," Discord replied, with a grin.
Fluttershy walked around slowly taking in what had all happened. She felt sadness, fear, anger, remorse, and shame. None of this would have happened if she had just reformed Discord successfully. Quickly, she shook her head. She had to stay strong for her friends. If she failed at this, who knew what Discord would do?
"I'm ready," Discord said, annoyed, breaking her thoughts.
Fluttershy turned towards Discord. He was wearing a graduation cap and had a pointing stick in his hand. Behind him, stood what looked like the setup for a school. There was a large teacher's desk, a chalk board, and a smaller desk, which she assumed was for her.
Slowly, Fluttershy made her way to the smaller desk and took a seat. Discord snapped his fingers and appeared behind the teacher's desk. With his stick, he started pointing to the chalk board. Fluttershy realized that the chalk board had writing appearing on it all on its own.
"Ok, Fluttershy, do you know what chaos is?" Discord asked in what Fluttershy guessed was supposed to be a stuffy, old professor's voice.
The word "chaos" appeared on the chalk board with a question mark next to it.
"Um, well...," Fluttershy trailed off.
"Oh come on, Fluttershy! Are you telling me you don't know what chaos is?" Discord asked in a way that caused Fluttershy to sink back in her chair, terrified. He had slipped out of his professor voice. "I only do it like every day. Did you pay no attention to me when we hung out? Did you just cope with me for Celestia?"
Fluttershy shook her head, vigorously.
She then whispered softly, "I spent time with you because I thought you were my friend, Discord."
Discord blinked. A look of surprise, wonder, and happiness filled his eyes. Then, almost as quickly as the look appeared, it was replaced with one filled with pure darkness.
"Friend?" He scoffed. "You thought I was your friend, my dear? What a naive, childish thing to believe!"
As he turned away, he missed the tears that filled Fluttershy's eyes at his words. She quickly tried to wipe them away, so he wouldn't notice. He had never once thought of her as a friend. The friendship with him that she had cherished was nothing more than a lie. At that moment, a look of pure determination filled her eyes. She would be Discord's perfect student. Not for him, but for her real friends.
"Chaos is a state of utter confusion or disorder; a total lack of organization or order," she answered, reciting the dictionary definition perfectly.
"Correct!" Discord answered with a smirk. "I must be the best teacher ever! You only could have learned that from me."
Fluttershy rolled her eyes.
"Ok, now show me," he ordered.
"Show you?" Fluttershy responded, confused. "I don't have any magic. I can't."
"That's right!" Discord said, snapping his fingers. "Ok, I gave you some of mine. Try now."
Fluttershy looked around, confused. She had expected some magical lasers or explosions to occur when he gave her magic. Discord noticed her confusion.
"Is something wrong?" He asked.
"Well, I was expecting something to happen when you gave me magic," she responded. "You know some magical lasers or explosions. Something chaotic. This seems kind of boring from your standards."
He stared at her.
"Maybe not," she mumbled, unsure.
"Did you just call me boring? Boring! I am the complete opposite of boring. You want some explosions and lasers? Fine," Discord was about to snap his fingers, but thought better of it. "You know what? If you want lasers and explosions, do it yourself."
"O-okay," Fluttershy stammered, about to try, afraid of his reaction if she didn't.
She thought of fireworks like the ones Discord used to make when he visited her at her cottage. He would always set them off when he appeared out of nowhere in an attempt to surprise her. Normally, the memory would have brought a smile to her face, but now that she knew her whole friendship with Discord was fake it made her want to scream and cry all at the same time.
"Not getting any younger over here," Discord said, interrupting her thoughts.
He transformed into a baby version of himself and started crying. On instinct, Fluttershy started to reach out to pick him up and comfort him. She quickly stopped herself and shook her head. He was trying to distract her. She needed to concentrate, but he was just so loud.
"Um... Could you stop crying now?" Fluttershy whispered.
He continued to cry.
"C-could you please stop crying now?" She tried again, a little louder.
If anything, he seemed to get louder this time. Then, he crawled over to her tail and yanked on it.
"Ow! Would you just stop it?" She screamed, stomping her hoof.
Instantly, a straight jacket appeared on the baby Discord. A pacifier also appeared and shoved itself in his mouth. All was quiet.
Fluttershy couldn't help but giggle at the sight, breaking the silence. The baby comically rolled his eyes, and with a flash, Discord appeared out of the straight jacket, fully grown. He still had the pacifier, though, which he was sucking on. Now it was Fluttershy's turn to roll her eyes.
Discord flashed away the pacifier and said, "Well, those weren't the explosions and lasers I was talking about, but it's a start."
Fluttershy gasped, "Wait, you mean I did that?"
"Do you really think I put myself in a straight jacket on purpose?" He responded.
"Well..." Fluttershy started.
"Nevermind, don't answer that," Discord scowled. "Anyways, I made myself that baby to annoy you. Magic comes from emotion, my dear. When you got mad and stomped your hoof, you set off your magic, just like me snapping my fingers sets off my magic. Got it?"
Fluttershy absentmindedly nodded. He'd called her my dear. Before he'd been reformed, he'd always called her that. The thought made her cringe.
"Something wrong?" Discord asked, surprisingly calm.
"Oh no! I'm just thinking," she responded, again absentminded.
Suddenly, there was a flash and Fluttershy found herself on a couch with Discord next to her on a leather chair. He wore glasses and a suit with a clipboard in his claw.
"Do you always think this much, my dear?" Discord asked, with a voice not unlike his professor one.
Fluttershy cringed again.
"No, not usually," she responded.
"Why do you think you're doing it so much today?" He asked.
"Oh, I don't know. Maybe because I was forced to leave my friends in order for you to stop flooding Ponyville," she responded, her voice thick with sarcasm.
"You weren't forced to," Discord responded, calmly. "Princess Know-It-All was just as ready to come here as you were."
"Don't call her that," Fluttershy shouted, stomping her hoof.
As soon as she stomped, a zipper appeared where Discord mouth should have been. Quickly, it zipped itself closed.
Fluttershy sighed.
Discord unzipped his mouth, and then flashed the zipper away.
"Fine, have it your way," he said. "We'll pick up where we left off tomorrow."
He then snapped his fingers and a door appeared in front of him. He opened it and was about to step through when Fluttershy asked quickly,
"Where am I supposed to sleep?"
"You have magic now," he growled, frightening her. "Make your own house. We wouldn't want any Timberwolves getting you before we even get started."
With that, he stepped through the door and slammed it closed.
Fluttershy closed her eyes and tried to imagine her cabin. No matter how much she stomped, it wouldn't appear.
"Magic comes from emotion," Fluttershy mumbled, remembering what Discord had said.
She thought about all the fun times she'd had with her animal friends at her cabin. The memory made her want to run to her bed and sob. With that thought in mind, she stomped her hoof once more, and her cabin appeared.
Without even thinking, she burst open the door, ran up the stairs, into her bedroom, and collapsed onto her bed sobbing. Realizing she would get no sleep this way, she got up, lifted the blankets, and snuggled under. She cried herself to sleep, not aware of the dreams that she would have to face.
Yay new chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Know-It-All
5508129 Thanks for the correction! I'll fix it right now!
5508147
No prob
5508164 I know you probably want a chapter soon, but with school it's really hard to find time. I'd say expect one once a month.
5508206
It's fine. Trust me I understand the calling of reality
I always look forward to new chapters, bit never take it as an "I WANT IT, AND I WANT IT
NOWYESTERDAY"5508247 Okay! Thanks so much for the positive feedback! Do you have any constructive criticism? I would love to know how I can improve!
B-E-A-UTIFUL
5508266 Thank you soo much!
DISCORD, YOU APOLOGISE TO HER THIS INSTANT!!!
Nice work on this! Still getting the BOD feel, but it's good nonetheless! Oh man. Discord, for cotton candy's sake, give in to the friendship nagging at you.
No, don't even try to deny it. You want to have friends that appreciate your chaos, which is why you've got yourself a student (I think!)
5508266 is that a reference to 'Bruce Almighty'?
5508891 Whaaaaaaat? Noooooo.... Okay... fine you got me!
5508891 Nice theory on why he wanted a student! Not completely right though. Let's just say there's a lot more to it than that! More than meets the eye! No spoilers though!
Sorry if it has a BOD feel to it still. DF is soo good. I guess I can't help but copy her a little.
I want Discord to give into the friendship too (maybe even more than that) but alas that would be too easy! There's still a long chaotic path he and Fluttershy must take.
5508963 Now that you point it out, I remember him saying that. Lol
"What is Chaos? Baby don't hurt me..." xD
5509494 Oh...k...
5508256
To be honest, I can't think of anything right now. I guess Discord seems a little dickish-er than usual. but you said you'd be explaining that in the next few chapters.
So nope, I'm just gonna chill for a bit. But if I notice anything in the future I'll be sure to let you know!
5510635 Like you said I said Discord's behavior will be explained hopefully next chapter!
Not finding anything wrong with my story is a real compliment! On the Prolouge I got like a bunch of complaints. Don't get me wrong! I'm a big girl! I can take constructive criticism! It's just some praise is nice!
I guess just overall: Thanks!
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reference
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xhrBDcQq2DM
5511829 I get it now! Yeah, I'm bad like that! Thanks for showing me what you meant!
Omg! Ibaby discord!!!
If I had powers that would be the first thing I would do. And u (made Fluttershy ) made it so much better!
Good Chapter
5513365 Thanks for the compliment!
5511956 This is great. I really enjoyed this chapter. I didn't notice any significant grammatical errors from the first time I read this but I'll make sure I go over it again more thoroughly. This was awesome though, so far you made my day.
5539470 That's so sweet! Consider 2 days made! Remember to look at the sypnosis I PMed you of chapter 2. Overall thanks!
Now that was awesome! I'm really excited to see your take on how Discord creates chaos!!!!!!
5571045 Wow thanks!
On the editing thing, I'm good. I kinda already some one helping me. Oh, I'll try to be more descriptive. This is my first story, so yeah. Btw chapter 2 is about halfway done so yay!!!!!
5571313 Like I said, this is awesome for your first, and very unique. The story line is original and it shows people a side of Discord that I don't think most people write about.
5572507 You are so sweet and observant! I think you are one of the first people to see how much work I put into making Discord darker than in most Fluttercord stories!
Hi there. I decided to give this a second look. The first time there were so many errors that it made it hard for me to concentrate on it. I was very pleased to come back and find it edited and enjoyable to read.
This is a very nice concept and original as Fluttercord stories go. It interesting to have Discord going a little darker after the Tirek incident instead of trying to fit in and instead wanting to manipulate again. You have chosen the part of his personality a lot of people gloss over and are writing it very well. Its very much not a moral grey area for him and his obliviousness to just how much his goading her on purpose is affecting Fluttershy is very true to character. He has no idea that it most probably will backfire on him in some way.
5573410 Oh, and next chapter you find out why he's acting like this. There's a reason!
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I figured there was. Although it looks like partly is was to get her mad enough to use the magic.
5575287 Let's just say there's more here than meets the eye!
Hmm.. pinkie crashes the school thing???