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This story is a sequel to Short Changeling Hero
It's that time of year again. The snow's falling, the animals are sleeping and everypony is bringing in the holiday cheer. But for two incognito Changelings and one mare, this is so much more than a holiday.
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Not bad - very heartwarming and fuzzy.
Space it out, though.
Also, in regards to the actual story, it appears to just be fluff. What's the conflict meant to be? What's the point of this, beyond simply showing a world wherein ponies and changelings coexist, and showing the existence of love? This is the introducion of a setting and characters, not a story.
Edit: didn't notice that this was a sequel. My point still totally stands, because if a story can't stand on its own, it should probably be lumped together with its predecessor.