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Amity Leaf


Hi there! :) Thank you for taking a look at my profile. I enjoy reading, writing, and musical theater and I hope you have a great day!

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After Diamond Tiara's birthday party goes horribly wrong, Apple Bloom makes a wish with unintended consequences. Now finding herself the future, she must learn to adapt to her new life as a fully-grown mare.

But she soon learns that somewhere in the past, the Cutie Mark Crusaders split up! Determined to set things right, Apple Bloom sets out to find her friends and mend the mistakes made in the past...while trying to find a way back to the present!

(Cover art not mine...link is here!)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

This is an interesting premise for a story, and it is well suited for Apple Bloom. You do a nice job of capturing the CMC's voices in your dialog, though it will be interesting to see how Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo have changed throughout the years. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more and seeing how AB and DT became best friends.

Heard you were going somewhere, so I brought some stuff!”

I really can see when and how she fouds that since AB told no one about this improvised trips.

As the pink pony kept chattering, Apple Bloom groaned and turned away, trying to make herself comfortable. This is gonna be a long ride…

Or you could talk with Diamond, ask about Scoots and Sweetie, grab some informations instead of doing nothing, you silly filly. :facehoof:

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