I'd like to thank DarknessRising, he's the one who came up with the idea an commissioned me, I'm just the pen.

i do not know why i enjoyed this

Poor Twilight, and those poor stallions. They're going to go looking for Twilight at the school only to find that she now lives in Ponyville, that's gotta suck.

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Could use another pass for editing, but otherwise pretty good.

I like this. Continue.

I like this, but it could use some editing. Also, the title of the chapter was very misleading.

5349333 Thank YOU for taking up my idea!

...I've felt like I've read this before... or at least something incredibly similar. heh.

i love it.

what a rather interesting approach.

Can't believe I have to point that out, but...

>masterbate
>masterbating
-masturbate
-masturbating

In fact, after seeing the error multiple times... I must ask 'Why ?'. I mean 'how' was such an easy to see mistake left in pretty much all the chapters ?

I really like this premise and am eager to see where it goes.

entreating story but you should've called it Sexquestria

I would think the elements of debauchery could take the place of the elements of harmony in a slightly more serious way. That they can create bonds between ponies based on their mutual pleasure. In that I would think Twilight would think about sex in a very objective way to relieve stress and as a way to show loyalty to Molestia. She needs to learn how to not only have sex but how to also love.

Ze Grammar Nazi Group has spotted a mistake!

Twilight groaned in her throat. She was so close to coming, and now all she had was an aching marehood and a long list of priorities to compleat[complete].

"Ugh! Does that pony do anything besides study and masterbate[masturbate]?" Twinkle Shine asked her companions.

"My dearest fuck slave, Twilight. You know that I value your intelligence and that I trust you completely. But you simply must stop spending all your time masterbating[masturbate] and reading."

HAIL GRAMMAR!

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I... What?

Well I can't stop here, ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

I started reading this after I watched a bunch of everything that is wrong with mlp so it felt weird reading this but I love it so far you should watch the first three video of the mlp one and see if it is just me

"O……K……time to……get back……home." She wobbled a bit like a baby dear as she regained her composure and started on a slow trot.

Deer is the animal. Dear is a loved one. Or someone you're looking down on, either or.

I don't know why, but I feel Discord has something to do with this... Hmm... Maybe not...