Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. 
Planning a royal wedding is hard. Celestia had a good idea to bring Twilight and her friends in to help. Shining and Cadence would be happy to see her and meet her friends.
Until then... Before things start getting real....
Bachelor/Bachelorette Party.
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I give it a Shigeru Miyamoto out of 100.
I especially liked the horsies.
I had fun reading this.
I really got a kick out of Shiny's answer to the question "Any cold hooves?"
This needs to be done.
With the sex tag I thought there would been actual activity implied, but seems it is not the case. Have to say I actually like it this way, ending especially tied the whole thing together nicely.
5348403 It has been done. Search for Celestia Lays an Egg. Expect exactly what it says in the title.
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Huh. Turns out I already read it. Wow, I'm forgetful.
5348403 I'm sure there's some alicorn oviposition on this site. Not fucking enough if you ask me
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See previous two comments.
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5349568 Did you guys like the fic?
5349813 It was well written. No glaring mistakes. didn't quite catch my interest though. Sorry.
5349813 Short answer: It's cute.
Long answer: You intended for it to act as a prologue for an episode of the show, and I see that as a little bit of a problem. When I try to judge it's merit as a standalone piece of work, it just ends up feeling like a fragment of a story. There's some drunken guy talk and some drunken girl talk, the end. Well written, but it doesn't go anywhere.