• Member Since 29th Mar, 2014
  • offline last seen Jun 7th, 2018

Derec mc coy


Your favorite jackass is back from the dead. be aware.

T

Applebloom fell in love with one of her best friends. But is it right to have this feeling?

She tries to figure everything out, but when the love of her life turnes her down, she's devestated.

Secrets were made. but sometimes you can't hide them....Especially, when they are broken.

Thank you Sakra for the editing

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 9 )

Eh, it was a good read but romance isn't my thing I could go on about a few things that took me out of the story but I don't want be an asshole that believes he knows best.

Kidnapping is a serious offense. :twilightoops:

DT could be put away for something like that.

5392217 Thank you so much!!!

I like it :)
But consider more detail and focus on grammar. I hope I am not annoying, just trying to help you becoming a better writer.
Can't wait for more though!

5439461 thank you. I'll try to watch it.
I'm glad you like it.

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