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Behold the first ever Sunset Harem fic. And please for the love of Molestia add Sonata to the harem, because she is the best siren,
That actually reminds me of an idea a friend once had. In that, Sunset discovers that her demonic posession left her with a hunger for lust and admiration, that affects her physically. If she does not get a certain amount of those emotions (which she has to do so sexually) , her metabolism shuts down in a way similiar to someone who has low sugar. Part of her finding out that her problem is of magical nature includes, that she finds herself hypnotizing someone by accident into pleasuring her and realizing that she grows fangs during those moments.
The idea was that Sunset obviously tries to find a way to get rid of the condition, but as time goes by, she more or less adjusts to it, enslaving/falling in love with a bunch of students (including of course the mane 5, who in parts fall for her on their own accord) and a few slip ups aside (e.g using her power to make a bunch of bullies embarass themselves sexually for bullying Fluttershy) she tries to keep her morals.
so in short, a mind control/corruption/harem story with the enslavement/rape aspects being significantly toned down when compared to other people's work.
I don't know in which direction this one will go, but so far it looks okay. And I hope to see something similiar to what my friend tought of in parts, as I always thought those ideas had potential.
PS: If I may suggest one thing: If your story includes the Sirens down the line, how about making tem try to corrupt Sunset to gain her succubi powers (as they are similiar to theirs), only to end up as docile addition to a harem? Convincing them they will also be adored if they are just happy little slaves to her mistress
Not bad at all. Lust for power, power to control minds, that's exactly how Sunset was in the first movie and certainly sounds like a succubus. It makes sense that she gained her powers from one., I presume by calling on those powers using the Element of Magic. This should be a very interesting story.
This was a pleasant surprise. Clop with a story is always appreciated in my book and you're exceptional at it!
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Yeah, I don't want to bring in a lot of negative crap, this is probably going to keep to a more positive feel, and focus on those themes of enlightenment and discovery I was exploring in A Thin Line.
I think Rainbow Rocks showed, more than anything, that Sunset Shimmer is an excellent character for storytelling. Relatable and cool in an interesting way, she captures this sense of breakable, yet unbroken spirit that feels really human. She's surrounded by opportunities and power at every turn, and I want to explore what it's like to be presented with such things, and what effects those have on the status quo.
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Glad to see your silly avatar again! Sorry about the confusing hiatus limbo of "A Thin Line," I guess I lost interest in that story. I always knew I should have just kept it to the original vision of 3 chapters, but I got carried away by the story's success and had to keep adding more, until eventually I ran out of room because the original premise wasn't built to sustain something like that.
It'll probably never get finished at this rate, unfortunately, but I'm glad people enjoyed it, and I'm thankful that there's still a place for my writing style among all the fics we have now. I can only hope that people will enjoy this story half as much.
Wow, I think Rarity may have to burn that matress, it's probably soaked through. That's assuming she can even get near it without being overwhelmed by pheromones. Actually burning it might be a bad idea, who knows what those pheromones would do when heated. Then again washing them away could be even worse, if it gets into the water supply, the whole town could get horny.
Maybe Sunset should wear a hazmat suit from now on, then she can't affect anyone.
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Rarity probably has a hazmat suit fetish, though. It'd explain why the pony version had one on hand...
5347715 Ha, that would be funny. Completely protected from the pheromones but finding Sunset sexier than ever. Poor Rarity.
Love the story so far
Love it!
Woo, EqG clopfic time! Let's get to it!
Well, at least she's a lucky number.
Then just take the mean. Jesus Christ, this is common statistics we're talking about.
Was there, like, an empty hole in her chest she used to stuff Twilight into?
Can she see the dark now? That'd be a pretty sweet power, actually. Just think of how convenient it'd be. Plus, you'd save soon much money on electricity and light bulbs.
I got five bucks saying she grows a penis. Who's with me on this bet? Do I have any takers? Five dolla, I say five dolla on Sunset growing a dick! Let's hear it now!
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You thought much harder about that description than I did.
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Listen, I don't know you, you don't know me, but let's make this simple. Include Sunset with a penis in the story and I'll give you a nickel out of the five bucks I'll win in the bet. Sound good? Greeeeeeat.
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Can't promise anything, dicks are kinda gross. Lesbians 5ever.
Anything is possible, though.
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Thanks bro. I'm totally gonna win that five bucks now.
5345683 would also be okay if Flash gets included in some way. I know he is not liked much, but I think it should be possible to write something where he and Sunset come to terms with each other without turning him into some abusive asshole, because people can't get over the fact Twilight thinks e is cute an he has as much personality in canon as most background ponies.
And seeing how he said in Rainbow Rocks things to her that in my opinion would justify a serious talk between the two...
after all, he called her "the girl we love to hate" and I think it would be interesting to see how much of it is actually true and affects both. Sunset because she knows she deserves some flag for her past, but may also still have feelings for him, and Flash because yes, he may have something against her because of their past, but actually not to the level he expressed while influenced by the Dazzlings.
What? I think the idea of him being temporarily turned into a sex toy for Sunset would be kinda good and could also put a certain amount of powerplay into perspective
Why do I have the feeling that Celestia and Luna will be a part of her harem? Meh, it could be just me.
5347446 Abandoned salt mines, if its good enough for radioactive waste I'd say it's good enough for the matress. The salt slowly grows and would eventually encase it.
I require more!!!!!!! Such a good story cant wait to see more
very hot!
5349647 I bet ten she doesn't!
Well.... that happened...... I like it........ good job thumbs up
Sunset Shimmer the succubus queen... Bound to one Princess Twilight Sparkle by oath of loyalty and friendship... Oh yes. Yes, please.
You need to work on your rambling problem. Your characters are a bit more chatty than they need to be, especially Fluttershy.
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Interestingly enough, I actually thought to myself while writing the latest chapter that the dialogue felt a bit preachy. Still published it since I'm a lazy hack, but just know your criticism is already being taken into consideration for future chapters.
i'm not really in this for the sex (surprising i know) but more of how Sunset if going morally, how she is questioning herself and stuff like that
still, great chapter
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You have no idea how much this comment means to me.
I'm in the same boat as Krazy. I'm here for the story and the story is great. Wonderful job!
The story so far is quite good
I really am enjoying the moral complications Sunset is having 
Though the sex is a bonus 
I WANT MOAR SOON! 
If that is alright with you 
this is a great combination of story and sex, i love it
So, is this fic a sequel to something? There's seems to be a lot of reference to Sunset previously being a succubus for an extended period of time and seducing students. When did that happen? It really feels like I'm missing something.
Sir the sex in this and a Thin Line were absolutely fantastic, but it's the extra effort put into thoughtful moral considerations that places this among my most favored story NOT pornfic.
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It's my silly AU world. Sunset's demonic powers from the first movie are reinterpreted as powers from a Succubus. I wanted to explain why Sunset changed so much between the movies, so I thought up the demonic influence thing, and I wanted the story to concern sex, so I made the specific kind of demonic influence that of a Succubus.
If you want to work it into EqG canon, just pretend that Sunset was done having sex with people at that point and was more focused on her final plan, or that she was having sex offscreen or something. Most of the sex I've been referring to in Sunset's past I've mentally placed as having happened before the first movie.
I do have to say (careful every pony, the idiot is speaking) that while it is a really good idea of Sunset having her doubts, the whole "We're nymphomainacs" just felt way to convinient and out of the blue to really be believable. I'd say that it would have been good enough with "We really like sex and doesn't need any of societys boundaries", and the dialogue with Rarity was a bit to short. But perhaps that's just me.
If I may say so, I think you should give Sunset longer moments of "What The F have I done". It would add even more depth.
HMM. A story about Sunset Shimmer going around having lesbian sex with her friends.
*rubs chin in contemplation*
I MUST PUT ON MY FANCY READING OUTFIT!
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There. Now let the reading commence!
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Sorry, meant to get to this comment a while ago.
I'm planning on making this a bit more serious, assuming I start finishing chapters again instead of writing half of one and moving on to write half of the next. I wanted Rarity and Fluttershy to feel like they were "easy mode", as it were. They're Sunset's gateway to this life, and the fact that they submit so easily is part of her coming struggles.
Maybe nymphomania is a contrivance, but I was also thinking of things that were easy to understand for the reader while staying sexy and maintaining overall tone. Maybe I fucked up, no idea, but it seemed like an okay explanation at the time I wrote it.
At any rate, if you're worrying, I guess what I'm saying is that this won't ever become a senseless fuckfest.
Unless, of course, I decide that a senseless fuckfest would be appropriate for building towards character moments.
5605283 I kept tracking it, just to see where you would take it, and it seems like it was a good idea then. :)
Well, I'm not going to turn this into a debate, just let me say that I understood what you were after, but just that word seemed... questionable. But that's old, let's move on! Into the future!
so is this still being worked on or is it pretty much dead
I've been watching waaay too many Michael Rosen Youtube Poops
Whoa, where did this come from?!
Yup, new story. Got inspired re-watching Rainbow Rocks the other day. I do believe you and I watched 2 completely different rainbow rocks.
6511448 "my name is I love SNATCH,
I teach little girls to be....
really good."
5349647 Bet's on. I say she doesn't by completion, cancellation, or hiatus
Question: Update?
Its sad to see stories like this just stop, especially after having such a strong start.
Did you even think this asking the artis of equestria untamed to make this story a comic.
It depresses me to see such a strong story abruptly stop and get thrown into the void of incomplete fics