• Member Since 3rd Dec, 2014
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Black Night


LOVE AND TOLERATE, MY PONY FRIENDS!

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Comment posted by Manes deleted Dec 21st, 2014
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Comment posted by The Guardian and Friends deleted Dec 21st, 2014

I'm kinda scared to turn off mature and see what this is.

Comment posted by Manes deleted Dec 21st, 2014

OMG DON'T HATE ON MY STORY!!!! :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

IT HURTS TO DELETE COMMENTS, BUT I HAVE TO BECAUSE YOU ALL ARE SO MEAAAAAAN! :fluttercry:

Comment posted by The Guardian and Friends deleted Dec 21st, 2014
Comment posted by Manes deleted Dec 21st, 2014

Well the story is a bit rushed but all and all not bad... Potential I can dig it.:twilightsmile:
So have a like and Interesting award...

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Comment posted by The Guardian and Friends deleted Dec 21st, 2014

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WHAT BAIT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? I DON'T GET IT!!!!!! :raritydespair:


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Trollfic? WHAT THE FUCK IS A TROLLFIC?!?!?!?!?!?

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5408913 Wow no love of tolerance in this crowd... Look everyone has a rough time starting out. Have you even seen his page it is his first fic. My first one was just so, so but it was enough to get me my first fifteen followers. Maybe give the guy a little slack he is just starting out.

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Comment posted by Fallen Prime deleted Dec 21st, 2014

On second thought, he's not trolling.

Trolls don't cross this level of stupidity.

Comment posted by Roarin Thunder deleted Dec 21st, 2014

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Like what Distorted Flames said, he's so good at trolling I cant tell if he's actually trolling or not.

Either this is genuine, or this guy has some experience and skill with trolling!

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WHAT THE HELL IS A RAGE REVIEW?!?!?!?!

IS THAT WHERE YOU DESTORY AUTHORS INOSENSE AND TEAR THEIR FANFICS LIKE YOU DID WITH RISE OF SPIKE THE DRAGON AND THE CHASE?!?!?!

What... Okay, I think Twilight would never stay with someone (somepony) who write a thing like this shit. :facehoof: Man, write better or stop writing and stop doing overpowered and shit OC's, please)

P.S.: Twilight is only for The Great and Powerful Trixie! :trixieshiftleft:

Comment posted by Commissar Rarity deleted Dec 21st, 2014

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TRIXIE CAN GO TO FUCKING HELL! I HATE HER AND THE TWIXI SHIP! :flutterrage:

5408982 Technically the Chase is so bad that nobody wanted to review it except for one person and that person has quit because it gave her a tumor. Rise of Spike the Dragon made the reviewer quit from how bad it was too.

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Why are you destroying fanfics and bronies dreams? Love and tolerate, remember?

Comment posted by theguysaidhi deleted Dec 21st, 2014

Could use a lot of work in grammar and punctuation. Your chapter names need to be capitalized. The story is too fast paced, and carries little to no detail. The story doesn't really have any originality, but so do the majority of the many stories. Try fixing these, and the story might be better.

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, Fort Impression On Everypony

Comment posted by Fallen Prime deleted Dec 21st, 2014

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Finally! Some actual positive feedback!

You haters need to change your ways and make good constructive criticism!

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