I'm kinda scared to turn off mature and see what this is.

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what do you mean?

OMG DON'T HATE ON MY STORY!!!!

IT HURTS TO DELETE COMMENTS, BUT I HAVE TO BECAUSE YOU ALL ARE SO MEAAAAAAN!

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I turned it off. I regret doing so.

Well the story is a bit rushed but all and all not bad... Potential I can dig it.
So have a like and Interesting award...

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Oh thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it!

5408893 Dude that is cold... Everyone has the right to dream.

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5408895

WHAT BAIT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? I DON'T GET IT!!!!!!

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Trollfic? WHAT THE FUCK IS A TROLLFIC?!?!?!?!?!?

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5408913 Wow no love of tolerance in this crowd... Look everyone has a rough time starting out. Have you even seen his page it is his first fic. My first one was just so, so but it was enough to get me my first fifteen followers. Maybe give the guy a little slack he is just starting out.

5408893

I LOVE TWILIGHT, OK? SHE IS MY BAE!

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I'm not trolling!!!!! I am serious about this!!!!!

On second thought, he's not trolling.

Trolls don't cross this level of stupidity.

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Like what Distorted Flames said, he's so good at trolling I cant tell if he's actually trolling or not.

Either this is genuine, or this guy has some experience and skill with trolling!

5408939 So, Twilight is your waifu?

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Bae is like waifu in a way.

5408958

WHAT THE HELL IS A RAGE REVIEW?!?!?!?!

IS THAT WHERE YOU DESTORY AUTHORS INOSENSE AND TEAR THEIR FANFICS LIKE YOU DID WITH RISE OF SPIKE THE DRAGON AND THE CHASE?!?!?!

What... Okay, I think Twilight would never stay with someone (somepony) who write a thing like this shit. Man, write better or stop writing and stop doing overpowered and shit OC's, please)

P.S.: Twilight is only for The Great and Powerful Trixie!

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TRIXIE CAN GO TO FUCKING HELL! I HATE HER AND THE TWIXI SHIP!

5408982 Technically the Chase is so bad that nobody wanted to review it except for one person and that person has quit because it gave her a tumor. Rise of Spike the Dragon made the reviewer quit from how bad it was too.

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Why are you destroying fanfics and bronies dreams? Love and tolerate, remember?

Could use a lot of work in grammar and punctuation. Your chapter names need to be capitalized. The story is too fast paced, and carries little to no detail. The story doesn't really have any originality, but so do the majority of the many stories. Try fixing these, and the story might be better.

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, Fort Impression On Everypony

5408997 Who has made your account, I'm curious now.

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Finally! Some actual positive feedback!

You haters need to change your ways and make good constructive criticism!

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what do you mean? I made my account!

5409008 bai

5408989 Oh my god! That hurt me so much! (sarcasm) *laughs* Congrats, jimmies firmly unrustled here!
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