Sometimes I like to just sit down and do nothing. Alright fine, all the time.
“It doesn't work like that Pinkie” Twilight said exasperated. The pink pony had been following her all day, repeatedly asking her about being a princess. Mainly on how to be one herself.
Pinkie has always love surprising her friends, but what she does next will surprise everyone.
Edit date: 6/04/2015
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is... pinkie breaking the fourth wall?
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"Yes. I am."
Pinkie. I'm trying to talk here, go away.
"Aw, pretty please."
No. I'm busy. You can talk to people later.
issue Celestia NEVER casted a spell the magic came from Twilight.
Please tell me this doesn't use the Parasite route for Nightmare Moon?
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What do you mean?
5344594
Parasite route?
5346301 It's from the Nightmare Rarity comic where NMM was not an alter ego of Luna but a parasite organism that took over. That route weakens Luna's Character and is a story ruining object for me.
5346395
I see nightmare moon as an evil entity that took Luna over. Screw parasites. Oh, and I just bought that comic.
5346791 nah NMM is Luna's darker half. Think of Batman's Two Face
5346796
HAHAHAHA
Love that link you made between the two.
5346870 NMM flippping a coin with her hair in the shadows. Yeah I can totally see that
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Pinkie would turn herself into the coin.
5346910 I wouldn't doubt that
A really funny story.
fourth wall breaking
Besides a few spelling errors, I love it.
Pinkie being pinkie
I think the part where Luna and Celestia finish off aurora was a bit hastily done, there could have been more to it...
Still, a very good story, although a lot of spelling errors/ typos...
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Yeah sorry about that. I was hungry and wanted to eat dinner, so I cut it short. Later I may revisit it and flesh it out a bit.
a part of me is saying Oh fuck yeah, but another is saying FUCKING RUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!
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Haha thx. Dont know if i should be happy or scared that Sombra is reading my stories though.
Please don't be... >:)
5395691
Well your always welcome to read my work.
You've still got a lot of simple errors: capitalization, punctuation, even spelling. You might want to get someone to help you with editing and proofreading for a while. I wasn't too keen on the turn into serious-pants involving that bit you spoilered in the description, either. But I think you wrote Pinkie well, and the fact that her crazy plan actually worked was hilarious. Keep writing!
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ALL HAIL THE ELITE OF FIMFIC! I'm not joking, it is great to see you here. I haven't really focused on editing here, but if you think I should, I'll start right now... after my tea, of course. My last edit was kinda lazy.
I find that I am kinda like Pinkie, even born on a Tuesday just like her, so it's easy for me to write her. Glad you liked it.
5825903
Wow! This is really bad. I should probably change the ending a bit as well.
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Well, expanding the ending was actually a good idea. It feels a lot less abrupt now.
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Yay! My purpose has been achieved. Now to make more chaos.
Aurora is a pretty cool name, though i woulda went with "Nightmare Balloon"
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O_O YOU'RE A GENIUS!!!!
Why didn't I think of that?!
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Story of my life... total genius when its totally too late
Somehow, I expected more. Still +1.