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Feather Note

"Never believe that a few caring people can't change the world. For indeed, that's all who ever have." ~ Margaret Mead


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The ride never ends. :pinkiecrazy: This was a terrific buildup; it's got me eager for what happens next!

:applejackconfused: Oh jesus! Hell is about to be unleashed once again, and the poor fools are going to regret not killing what they've found when they had the chance!

Not sure what this has to with Applejack.

7173941 Cool! I hope you're ready for the craziness!

7173960 Oh you better goddamn believe it! :pinkiecrazy:

7174025 Applejack is important. If you read the first prequel (not, The Hunt, then you'll be caught up to speed).

7174880 Yep. I can imagine how happy you and all the other fans must be. Hope you enjoy it!

This was a good way to catch up on the characters and see how all of them were coping with everything. Glad to see that they're relatively okay.

Is Spike gonna make an appearance in this story? After the way you said that he ran away, I'm kinda interested to see what happened to him.

A bittersweet recap of the events of the first story along with some elements of season 4. Clearly Twilight and everyone is still shaken up by the scars of horrors and tragedy left behind by the Xenomorph. Physically, everyone is recovering alright. Mentally, sadly not very much. And it's only a matter of time before they all have to face that nightmare again. If one Alien was terrifying to them, wait till they see how terrifying a horde of them can be. And with the Predators coming into the fray, it may be a utter bloodbath.

Weyland-Yutani… building better worlds.
Neighland-Yupony… building better countries.

If you see a company logo that sounds similar to another company that is secretly more dark and sinister than people realise, then you should know that they just sounds like bad news and can't be trusted!

7195273 Thank you! :twilightsmile:

7195490 I can't spoil completely. But I will admit that there is such a moment you are hoping for. :raritywink:

7195624 It truly is. :fluttershysad:

7198647 Yep. It is quite an unfortunate set of circumstances.

7198942 Yeah, but now we've got a new list of ponies to read about! (Mostly new)

Time to get a death list ready

This is already looking great. Favourited!

Trixie and Babs have been kidnapped! Oh god, please don't tell me their gonna be used as hosts for alien impregnation.

7217997 Yep. I have enough written down to keep the train going once every week. They are always published on each Saturday, just to let you and other readers know this as well.

Heartless, insane ponies... Equestria's nightmare hasn't ended.

:twilightangry2: Those monsters!!! Abducting different species across Equestria simply to use them to provide hosts for the aliens! Have they no soul?!

Nope, only wallets and bank accounts.

7235030 Indeed scumbags they are. But who knows. There may be some good ponies? You may never know.

This... was... amazing. The tension feels off the charts; I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Now I hope these Neighland-Yupony ponies get banished to the Sun. I wonder where is Spike...

7255232 Glad you enjoyed this chapter. :pinkiehappy:

7255422 Well, Princess Celestia doesn't know about it. :unsuresweetie: As for Spike... isn't that an interesting question? :trollestia:

Let's see, getting my death list ready

Diamon Dog
Ol' Salt
Unnamed Earth Pony #1
Unnamed Earth pony #2

Or the Earth Ponies names were mentioned and I just forgot :P

I'm afraid that, as this story gets close to its end, it will be faster to list those still alive than those who aren't...

7257027 I'll get that list running soon enough, just waiting to see if more characters are introduced

7257083 A list of those who are deceased, huh? Interesting... :pinkiecrazy:

Excellent chapter again! The Mane 6 and Daring should better team up to face the oncoming storm...

A new name for the list!

Diamon Dog
Ol' Salt
Unnamed Earth Pony #1
Unnamed Earth pony #2
Prince Blueblood

I say Blueblood's death is the best death in the entire story for right now!

7298078 Wow. XD Can't believe you enjoyed his death so much! :applejackunsure:

7298301 Yep, he should have seen it coming, but he just thinks he's invincible.

Until he died of course XD

Ah, yes. Blueblood's death. It's a guilty pleasure coming up with horrible deaths for despicable characters :pinkiecrazy:. Feather Note and I had fun planning this one, but there are more on the way. You'll have quite the list of names by the time the story is over.

The Runners have been introduced. They are produced by quadruped creatures (ponies, diamond dogs, buffalo, etc.).
As described, they are smaller but swifter than Xenomorphs produced by biped creatures, such as the human-spawned nightmare from the first story.
Not to give too much away, but there will be new Xenomorph variations in the upcoming chapters. What could they possibly be? :pinkiecrazy:

7302688 XD He's teasing everyone in the comment section so hard! :rainbowlaugh:
>> derpyhooves320

7302688 The tease is real, now I can't wait for future chapters

Great chapter again! I can't wait to see W-Y ponies get punished! and their prisoners hopefully saved, too!

Interesting, I wonder what is Bishop's thoughts on Twilight. He would seem like someone to put on a pedestal because as far as I know, Twilight is someone who came a common family to reach the third highest ranking position of the lands, based on mariet and talent. Also wonder how the story will progress and if he will be cursing up a storm he realize some of those he capture were ponies that are friends of Twilight Sparkle, a princess who live in the small town Ponyville.

7337121 Well, that's a certain isn't it. To see if they get punished. But you remember Weyland-Yutani right? Did they ever get punished for their deeds?

7337683 Bishop Neighland certainly is a peculiar pony. Seeing Royalty like Blueblood as a threat and yet praising Celestia and the others. In some cases I agree. Some rich people are... awful. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh boy, good to come back and read this after sitting off to the sides for a while

7376375 Thank you. Really appreciate that you guys like this story. :twilightsmile:

Things are going to get hard... I can't wait to see what happens next! Great chapter.

7377511 Thanks. That really means a lot. :twilightsmile:

7377816 Of course. And thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying this story. :yay:

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