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The King of Hearts


Plain and simple Brony. (Loves Ding Dongs. (The chocolate kind(Not the weiner kind (Unless I'm in a good mood.))))

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Wow! 1 upvote already!

Whoops, looks like that was just me who did that.

I'd better stop talking before I start to look stupid.

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Alex and Rainbow Dash hate each other now? When did that happen? I'm just now getting to 'Haven Station'.

Hm. . .That escalated quickly.

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It's from the rewrite timeline. Don't worry about your canon and where you are now.

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Of course! It is a oneshot clopfic after all.

It's more of a service for the readers of my story, and might just look weird on the outside.

“Good! I hope I never see you again!” She countered, feeling a fire burning deep in her chest, enhancing every emotion she was experiencing, as they both raggedly breathed on one another in terrible silence.

I just want to note that if you only read up to here, you could assume that Alex and Dash had the angry sex.

...and I was right.

5334214 Seriously‽ This whole story should be in "spoiler" mode. (I even found an interrobang to express how I felt about this).

5334365 I didn't read this story. I thought this was canon, at first. What is an interrobang?
5334279 Thanks. That's good to know.

ANGRYSECKS - the future is here.

Not hesitating for a moment, Alex leaned forward placed his tongue on her left cheek, and worked it straight up, gathering all of his seed from her eye, and licking it back in to his mouth.

He licked all of his cum into his own mouth?

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Yes. Yes she did. It's a new thing they're trying in Taiwan.

I totally didn't miss that..............

In what part THIS happened?

Comment posted by ThatNerdKid456 deleted Dec 2nd, 2014

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Interrobang sounds more like a sexy interrogation.

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Off the Record AU, just after the episode "Griffon the Brush-Off".

5336392 *nods* Yes. Yes it does.

This...this just made my night complete. Excellent oneshot in my opinion, dear writer.

Well, that happened :rainbowlaugh:
Also, an interesting way to make friends!
That pun was bad and I'm going to jump out of a window now.

This is...honestly very good. I'm a huge fan of the original OTR and I thought this would be about the time they did it on the TARDIS but this one was just as good. Though it's the alternate universe Alex and Dash were believable, the dialogue was humorous and descriptive, and the actual sex was handled quite well.

I tried writing clop once and I wasn't pleased with the result. Is it actually easy to do and i'm just an asshole?

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...I'd love to say that it's hard.

But I'm afraid you are just an asshole.

Joking! Man! Please stop crying!

I think I just got lucky with stuff from sbloom, that I was able to build on, because I was really happy with the result myself.

*high fives uncle chet*

I don't know what it is about angry make-up sex like this that is so appealing. One minute your arguing, the next your banging. It's pretty damn awesome to tell the truth, and you did pretty damn good for this one-shot.

This was very nice. Though I was wondering if you would possibly do another version were Alex maybe didn't pull in time? Just a thought.

KOH you should write a few more of these when you get the chance...

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I didn't write this I'm afraid. It was sent to me by a reader and I just edited it to look like a chapter.

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We'll then you should try to write one of these yourself

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