What we've seen of Donut Joe is just a cover of a long story.
Skills, gadgets and a few mares later he's made his name as professional secret agent Mane, Con Mane. His career takes a grinding halt after some of the horrors he's seen throughout his life and quits. Now, living by his cutie mark as a baker, Joe tries to come to terms with his past and let it go.
A new threat has been made against Equestria, and Joe must return to his other life, face his inner demons and complete his final mission.
Chapters (2)
Very nice opening chapter. I can't wait to read more
Baron Silverclaw? Brilliant 
I have a feeling he's either General Ouromov from Goldeneye or General Orlov from Octopussy. But I digress, great job 
One more thing...Eventually I want to see this on EQD :P Being a HUGE James Bond fan, this has made my day.
This is the first Con Mane fic I've read and I can already tell it's going to be so awesome
Double Oh Donut? I would've gone for Donut Oh Seven!
But I digress - this is an excellent story, and I'll be watching it... LIKE A HAWK! (Why, can't you watch it like a human? 
) No, shut up, Pinkie. 
this story does James Bond justice, hope the more regular MLP parts are just as good
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Lol, I just didn't want to use something that had "Wing" in the name
Thank you though!
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It'll be a mix of action and drama, but I'll give it my all! Thank you
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Oh! I was looking around a couple days to make sure I didn't copy anyone, then a couple days to get the idea right. Thanks though!
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Thanks! I was wanting to not push any copyright crap by using 007, plus double oh donut just seems a bit of comic relief.
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Thanks! I hope you enjoy it!
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Once I get a good ways into the story, I release it on EqD. Right now I just want to get my bearings and get some criticism (I'm still a new writer
That was brilliant
. This was a interesting idea and I'm surprised that there aren't more stories like this.
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Thank you for the support!
Just be sure to call me out on anything, I feed off of criticism.
515121 Sure I'il do a double read.
515121 For some reason I don't like your descriptions... Everything seams rushed. This is partially explainable due to the nature of the story. The story starts out quite differently than the title suggests. The separatist movement is very original. Also it would sort of seem stupid for a great spy to leave a guard's body just lying in the open. You should probably spell out commander. Who is Nu?
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Yeah, I get the feeling that the descriptions are a bit rushed and unorganized. I'll get my bearings and work through that(Especially when it comes to the non-tense sections of the story). Ch.1 starts out in the past, and the time line will be self explanatory as the story progresses. Nu is M. I don't want to reveal anything else though..
Sorry about taking so long everyone, I had exam preparation at school really eating up my time
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Thanks! You ain't seen nothing yet!
Even though the battle is over you still seem to be rushed. This could be at least twice it's length.
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Shipping detected.
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The descriptions as well? What do you recommend, cause there were a few things I cut? And about the shipping, eheh..Don't worry.
But thanks again for the review
Great story and cant wait for more