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Your story has a feeling of dream-logic and high fantasy. An endlessly-burning library, with a harsh taskmaster of a Librarian. Escaping through a pool of dark water.
You have a lovely imagination!
Great imagination for this chapter! Though maybe a little bit more info on how she got there and why. That seems like a story all in itself. Also, why isnt there any comments?
Damn this is interesting. Looking forward to reading the rest of this. If I had to make a suggestion however I would say that you need to make a way noticeable for when the scene is changing. Tis a bit disconcerting to be reading then suddenly be thrown somewhere else other than that: THE INTRIGUE!
whats this crossed over with isit the libarian or isit something esle?
wow, this is amazing! i wish there where a cover pic to illustrate the new Twilight's form
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Check the author's old blog posts. There is a picture of Twilight there.
couldn't help but feel that the librarian and the fox helper are from the last airbender, the librarian at least in part.
What in Equestria have you forged upon this digital semblance of paper?
This was beautifly terrifying
So if it's been 7 years and 3 since the fake Twilight's execution then that means that fake Twilight managed to cause havoc for 4 years!
~Leon
Dark, twisted but not Excessively so, Definitely excited to read more.
I know she said the fox can take after him self but where is he?? I love foxs there so cute.