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There is no more love.

There is no more queen.

There are only the silent echoes of a dying hive, as a lonely changeling, cut off from the hivemind, ponders the fate that has befallen his brethren.

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damn... that was *sniff* deep... to say the least...
il never look at a changling the same way again...:fluttershysad:

Is there going to be more? Cause it's marked incomplete.

Something tells me it's not a followup to your angsting over your toaster.

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That's what I get for submitting something at 2 AM.

5325474 Ditto. Dammit, this was brilliant. :pinkiesad2:

So... fucking... sad... :raritycry:

Oh god!! That was so sad especially with the music take my favorite I love changelings and hate for them to die. At least the few that were alive died peacefully. That's how I want to end, no regrets nothing but peace as I slip into an eternal slumber.

As said by Gandalf death is just another path one that we all must take.

I am surprised he didn't become a queen with the leadership he showed and the love pouring in from the other changelings. Surely at that point it could be sustaining.

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As with many other headcanons, the changelings in this story cannot feed off love from other changelings.

The music of the FF series is rivaled only by that of Dungeon Master, IMO. Excellent story.

simple, and elegant in execution. I wrote a changeling fic myself not long ago that is much more dark in nature that deals with
how changelings handle the severing of the hivemind called Isolation.

I do however, truly love that you turned something that otherwise would be a terrible tragedy into something of true beauty.

Congratulations.

sniff ......hrk....
walks out of room
Infantile Crying

Poor changeling. I would adopt and love you...

Ponies think challengings are horrid creatures but they don't understand that they are trying to survive. do you really think ALL challengings want to feed off all of your love. Don't you think that if there was another option. Chrysalis is trying to help the hive survive, and live and not perish to dust. If you are that much of a dick to see that then how the fuck can you claim you believe in the magic of friendship. :applecry: :ajsleepy: :fluttercry: :raritydespair: :raritycry:

THIS IS WHY CHANGELINGS NEED OUR LOVE!!! :raritycry:

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Poor misunderstood changelings...

wonderfully written. would make most anyone feel sorry for them at the end. lost, alone (till the end) and starving.

5325968 indeed it was, il never forget this one...

Read this a couple times now I still cant read without crying THIS IS ONE OF THE REASONS WHY CHANGELINGS GET MY LOVE!!!! My OC's mother who took on a life of her own after being a lone survivor of a disaster similar to this. No pony or changeling or any equestrian being deserves to die like this . At least the few survivors slipped into peaceful eternal sleep rather than die as a result of the earthquake.
Rest in peace changelings

*cries again*

The last changeling should make it to ponyville... you decide what happens next... which bring me to the question... sequel, or moar?

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I do have a sequel in mind, but it doesn't involve any of the changelings mentioned in this story.

5355675 Meh, as long as its a doctor who 'the last of my species' sort a thing, im ok with it.

5355675 I would like to see a sequel. And OMG I cried when I got to the part about the Changlings comforting each other.

Aw, poor changelings... To be real honest, I never really stop and think about the Changelings. This take was rather interesting to read, and it gave light to things I never thought about. Well done.

That was so sad and hopeless. Great read, loved the whole thing.

I read about the sequel and all I gotta say is 'No' do not make it a 'doctor who last one of his species thing'. That just screams 'powerful'. A survivor of genocide wouldn't be depicted as powerful, but depressed, hopeless, or cynical; as well as strong instead, as he tries to re-unite.

I wrote a review of this story!

It can be found here.

I'm conflicted. Part of me wanted a Deus ex Machina. The other wanted a peaceful end.

I feel horrible, that I'm glad, that it was the latter.

This didn't make me cry though. Not even close. Though I'm glad I read it.

Dark, sad and hearthwarming. Nicely done!

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