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Hello. I'm BillyColt. In real life, I'm a dweeby music student from California. Here, I write Pony fanfiction.http://billycolt.tumblr.com/


Sir Colton Vines III owns one of the largest vineyards in Equestria, but for all the money he's made on agriculture, he's forgotten his love for the growing things of the earth. When he decides to clear away a public park to expand his vineyard, Daisy, a flower seller, stands up to him.

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Oh, it's great to see this lovely story on FiMFiction!

:rainbowlaugh: Loved this story :twilightsmile: Glad to see it here.

Wonderful story. :pinkiehappy:

I shat a fucking brick wall. This was AMAZING

glad it finally got added to fimfiction.
it was one of the first fics I read and I loved it :)

Wow, this was a really nice story! Great job!

This was really good! :yay:
That's is all. Keep doing stuff like this :pinkiehappy:

I have 1 thing to say on the subject: DAW!!!!! :rainbowkiss:

That was freakin' adorable. Good writing, the telling of the story was interesting enough to keep me engaged even through a plot that we've all seen plenty of times before. (Not necessarily a criticism! Every classic storyline needs at least one good ponification, right?) I loved watching him try to explain hippies to the businessponies - "No, really, you try it."

My stars belong to you
Take all five of them!
And so do my Pinkies! Take them as well!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Cute little story.

AAAAAnnnnddd that's the sound of a jaw doing a Sonic Rainboom.

Wonderful. Read for content, not errors, so I didn't find any. But WONDERFUL story.

You kept all us readers hooked till the very end, and the romance wasn't ever a major 'spur of the moment' thing. Bravo, my dear writer, Bravo!

-The Librarian

110310 I see you on everything I read on here nearly, and never once have I heard you say anything negative. Lol

#14 · Jan 6th, 2012 · · ·

aww thats cute...

Jhsgfjghsfd. It's too cute. I absolutely loved it, that was one of the best fics I've read yet.

Hooray, you put this back up here~ The fixed version! All of my love.

Nice to see it here on fimfiction! I hope some kind of sequel or chapter 2 is coming :pinkiehappy:

You know, there's these five stars that have just been getting underfoot for a while, they're not doing anything useful for me... how about you have 'em? I think they'd look good on your mantleplace.

Lovely as always!

Figured I'd be better off watching you this way, Panini! :heart:

overhappy pinkieattack!!

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lol! :yay:

good one! would like to see more stories as good as this one :twilightsmile:

Great story! What amazing characterization! The dialogue practically defines each character and their natures. And dat ending! I didn't think he would Colton would end up losing so much of what he had.
It's really nice to see such a well written story that really brings in the reader. I should have read this sooner instead of keeping a tab on it. 5/5!

PS: The waiter's line just made me lose it. :rainbowlaugh:

Ah, beautiful.
I can find no better word for it.

Lilly, Rose, and Daisy seem like a bit of a hivemind to me. It's hard to tell who said what when they are all the same person in your mind. :applejackconfused:

I loved this story, things seems a bit quick and I'm not quite sure what "liquidated" means, did they buldose his vineyard or something?

Regardless I enjoyed finally reading this, I just didn't get around to it until now.

I think Colton should be madder than mad, after all those three girls have destroyed his livelihood.

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