Octavia is yet again alone for Hearts and Hooves day, and is being forced to perform at a Party for Pinkie Pie. But what happens if she gets a note from a mysterious Colt, telling her to meet him at the party? And what happens if Equestria suddenly ceases to exist right in the middle of it?
Here's what happens; The Doctor.
Part One of the Scratched Universe Saga.
WARNING: May cause serious brain hurting by Chapter 3.
I really felt that there weren't that many Octavia/Whooves stories, and I wanted to give it a try. It gives Octavia the more depressed feel, for anyone who might be hurt by that.
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Chapters (8)
Nice
write more! 
The Day Equestria Dissapeared. DED. Was that intentional? ehehehe.
Alright, I really like this concept. It's very different from anything I've read in quite a while, and I don't think I've ever seen Octavia/Whooves... Regardless, this is shaping up to be quite the interesting tale, and I will for sure be watching it.
Er, one small complaint though. Fish sticks? Fish sticks? Ponies are kinda herbivores, and, uh, even if they can eat meat, well, don't you think Octavia would have some reaction to them? I guess she must have seen them before, judging by her reaction, but it seemed wierd that a pony was eating fish of all things. Did I just miss something in the canon that qualifies this?
I agree with Melrioon. They seem to be acting too human. Shoes? Reallly? Other than that, great story.
PLOT TWIST
(goes to read next chapter)
Pink light? That's not possible. But this is pinkie pie so...
Wow this is unique
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The fish sticks thing is a concept from Doctor Who, and for now I'm too lazy to think of any herbivore relations.
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Ah. I don't watch Dr. Who, so I wouldn't know about that stuff. But I would advise having Octavia have some kind of reaction to fish sticks of all things. She probably shouldn't know what they were. You could keep them, but edit that part to get rid of her foreknowledge of fish sticks and put in confusion. It would make the story make sense a whole lot more.
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Yeah, I've changed it to Celery Sticks. Seems more average for a pony to chow down on those.
Oh... that's not good.
The irony of needing to remember something to escape your mind, only to not be able to remember it... while you are in your mind.
There we go. Creativity strike - END.
I'll work on more of this tomorrow/Monday. Enjoy
"Octavia was getting frustrated, not being able to remember a memory she needed to escape her mind, while being stuck in her own mind. Ironic."
YOU DON'T SAY!
I'm kinda confused here... She needs the dress to go to the party, but in order to get the dress she has to get it from the past, but in order to get to the past she has to get the dress...
Fuck timetravel...
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This is the exact confusion I was hoping to get
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this story is the definition of a paradox.
good tho
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It's supposed to be. It'll iron out around chapter 5/6, which I'm currently working on.
The plot thickens.
There we go! Main story done, I'm now finishing up the Epilogue.
And yes, I will continue this from a Vinyl/Whooves story sometime. Cause you know, Vinyl being a Time Mare is too good of an opportunity to pass up on
That was good looking forward to the epilogue
Epilogue done; Story done.
I feel accomplished, writing those 4 chapters in one day.
That was fast....
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Well, when you're home sick, and you have nothing better to do, with a ~180WPM typing speed, what else do you do?
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That is very impressive 180WPM typing speed just wow
any way onto the topic of this fic.
That was very good looking forward to more from you so i am probably going to watch you (in a non starker way)
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Hooray :3
“When a Time Colt is struck once, he regenerates. But if he is struck while he's regenerating, he dies. It was only a matter of time, I guess.”
Oh, you.
Well, I can say that I didn't expect it to wrap up so soon. However, I did enjoy this very much. It was a rather unique story, despite the fact that it is probably based in some part on Doctor Who, but I haven't watched Doctor Who. So it was a new story for me, and I'm okay with that!
And also, damn. You write fast...
After seeing epic wub time, Octavia is one of my new favorite background ponies. I can tell I will like this.
I cant belive this only has 7 likes... make it 8.
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Missed one reference to fish fingers in there. beyond that, Very well done!
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-Fixed-
Way to go. I'm surprised you only have 8 likes, but that's two more than my only story. I would press like more, but it doesn't work.
:D I love this story. And I believe the third alicorn is cadence?
Well, my dear friend, all I can do is praise you.
And so I shall.
Bravo, bravissimo! You've outdone yourself, though I state this on no physical evidence whatsoever.
Every Doctor has a taste, a colour, a theme. You have captured perfectly that of the eleventh Doctor, with all the confusing paradoxes and whatnot. Don't get me wrong, Tennant had his share, but the fifth season of the revived series was more Timey whimey, let's say.
Anyway, I'm ranting.
The point is, this was a fantastic story full of the classic DW moments where you just think "What the bloody hell is going on?!" and it makes my heart warm.
Though the alicorn bit was a tad cliché (as in fan made characters) it still was a brilliant story this one you told. Love the Weeping angel changeling Rose hybrid thingie. Again, classic Matt Smith-ish threat.
I now bid you adieu.
Red guardian out.
533276 Do fish have fingers?
Almost ten years by now. Hello from the future!
This is good, but the writing... is distracting...
Still: we are left very entertained
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