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GivingSpider


"Any religion that allows or commands you to pass judgement on, convert by force, or kill another human being is not a religion that serves any interpretation of any God or Gods above." Unknown

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Even after being reformed Discord still wants to cause just a bit of chaos every now and then; and he's got a new plan on how to get away with it. One that involves tricking his marefriend Fluttershy into following his riskiest scheme yet.

He'll get what he asked for but will it be want he wants?

Rated teen for suggestive themes of a sensitive nature. Disciplinary Spanking
AU tag is there to be safe.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 31 )

So...Fluttershy's in charge.

I am 100% behind that.

Hmmmm
I will be watching

An interesting take on an alternate universe. I like it.

This. Is. Sick.. in an interesting way.
I would've preferred this one as oneshot, though. You could have ended it right here (Chapter 1).
It's intriguing how you took Fluttershy's personality and without changing it, amplified it's quirks to such a degree, that she's become downright scary.
You managed to fluently make her into a bizarre caricature of what she used to be.

Really well done. Nice thought-experiment.

Wow. Just wow. Instant brain explosion. And I want to get more:pinkiehappy:

How long do you plan this story to be?

Then nothing changed still one with more power rule.

anyway au it is for sure, interesting but that spanking was like wtf did she do this to chrysalis too? Because i don't see anyother reason for her crying

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I don't see any other reason either.:twilightblush:
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Second half is in progress :yay:
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Glad to hear that Fluttershy doesn't come off as too OOC in this fic:eeyup:
I know I could have ended it where I ended it...but I really wanted have a part with Discord actually adjusting to the unforeseen consequences of his actions:twilightblush:

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:yay:

5320575 So Equestria will forever remain dominated by Fluttershy?

Wow. That's new.
...and sick at the same time.

Awesome story so far can't wait for the second chapter.

UPDATE NOW......if that's okay with you...

Thank you for updating this story.

Not how I was expecting that to go! Wow! That was pretty wicked. (A good wicked) I loved how quickly Fluttershy's mood changed from supportive to strict. And how Discord kissed her at the end. Dude's got Stockholm syndrome, and usually it's the other way around with these two. This whole story is backwards and totally awesome! 20% cooler than I expected.

Oh, and poor Twilight. :twilightoops:

Sorry, this needed to be posted.

Good story, very intersting, I'll be waiting for more.

Please do a chapter about Twilights encounter with Queen Flutterbat!

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Currently in progress:eeyup:

"Yay!" *In Fluttershy voice*

Ok ranting begins now : how dare discord give up god dammit I would have a
Said I'm sorry fluttershy for turning you into this monster slap flutters go back in time warb past discord give past discord remaining powers kill myself because um part of a timeline that no longer exists discord lerns his lesson fluttershy learns hers I like this story but that didn't happen now did it ugh I'm sorry but dislike:flutterrage::fluttercry: had the potential and you fed it up

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Thank you for telling me why I earned a dislike from you, and thank you for reading :eeyup:

6432032 yeah honestly I don't give dislikes easisly for other people yeah this might be a good story I liked it up to the point where he gave up and I read all the way through something that a lot of people don't do when they dislike something I do like your writing just this um yeah...

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Thanks for that; and good luck:yay:

What did I just read?!:rainbowlaugh: All hail Queen Fluttershy! I never knew she could be so threatening.

This reminds me of The Many Uses of a Brush with the way the scene is broken down.

Without warning Fluttershy brought the brush down much harder.

Ouch!,that must of hurt!😨

This was very... intersting. But in a good way.

The genre tags don't give justice as to what is happening in the story.

I can understand Twiight not wanting to accept Celestia being overthrown... I don't think she really deserves a spanking for questioning the transition or trying to defend her Princess. Especially a brutal painful one like Discord got. Is she being spanked for not giving Chrysalis another chance? Is it for not thinking logically and accepting Fluttershy as Queen after she was clearly the superior princess?

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Sorry to say, but if you asked that question three years ago; I might have had answers :twilightsheepish:
Feel free to apply your own headcannon though:eeyup:

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Oh ok I was hoping you might remember.

All hail Queen Fluttershy! Well done.

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