After Dinky Doo meets Pipsqueak, she starts feeling strange. What could it be?
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Maybe Dinky does, are you going to write a sequel?
Aww that was adorable
I like it!
Go Dinky!
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I can do one...if you want!
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Thank-you!
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5317649 Yes I want a sequel, I thought I had a crush once on somebody when I was really young, I'm sure Dinky's tale will end better though.
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Okay...I can do that!
Aww, that was so cute! :3 I liked that phrase "my stomach wants to be a gymnast." I can't wait for the sequel if it happens! :)
:D
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It will!! I have gotten several requests!
Once the rest of the ponies left, the purple mare and the white-and-brown colt went over to the saddlebags.
I think the corect term is 'filly'...
That aside: Soo adorable!!!
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Whoops! Thanks for the feedback!
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
Ehem.
Sorry, I'm a HUGE sucker for foal romance. It's my drug.
And PipDink?
God man, that's like sleeping in on a summer day.
In other words,
I caught some spelling mistakes, but I loved it so frippin much.
10/10! (Rating this at 10, giving it 10/10, illuminati confirmed)
Also-
Cheerilee is best troll.
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Thank-you! I bet there are spelling mistakes, I wrote this kinda distracted...mind pointing them out to me?
Also, thanks for the favorite!
This was nice. Simple but sweet and not very complex for kids, I like it.
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Thank-you! I noticed that I've been writing a lot of teen work so I wanted to do something simple!
Aww, that is just adorable, she has a crush on Pipsqueak, I really hope a sequel comes up, because it would be nice to see how it would go for her.
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Thank-you for the favorite and the comment!
There will be a sequel eventually...eventually!
Beautifully done. Short, well-written. No errors that jagged the imagination from seeing the scenes.
Light, adorable, and short. Nicely done. I wish I could write like this.
Except for the alicorn civil war, and Celestia and Luna adopting each other as sisters, I like it through and through.
Thumbs upping and shelving.
Some specifics:
1. "What are we learning about?" Pip Squeak asked, no understanding.
- Struck me as odd, but otherwise dismiss-able.
2. "I don't really have friends," Dinky replied, hanging her head.
"Nonsense! You have me!"
The purple mare blushed and felt slightly weird.
- Awesome. Pip here is coming out as British, but without going extreme on the British clichés.
3. The alicorn civil war bit was too extreme for me that I just skimmed through it, especially since I got the book, "The Journal of the Two Sisters" by Amy Rogers Keating.
4. You may want to link the sequel in a more obvious manner.
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Thanks for the feedback!
1) Simple typing mistake, supposed to be not
4) Odd, I thought that I did...good to know!
I'm really glad that you enjoyed!
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