Mikel is a DIE HARD brony. It doesn't help that help that he's a huge science nerd. It's his birthday and he only wants one thing: a rainbow dash tee. But he's about to get the ULTIMATE cos-play. Let's hope for the best.
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- Member Since 23rd Nov, 2014
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Jesus christ, this stuff is SO MUCH WORSE than I remember.
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I don't think he would automatically learn how to stand on 4 legs like that. Other than that, I'm pretty interested to see where you're going with this.
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Well It's not too hard actually. I'm actually not human 100% of the time. I spend most of my time in my rental house in Ponyville... AS A PONY.
Not exactly what I expected, but good. Keep it up!
Hunger. The most nefarious villian of all.
Also, I'm a girl.
But it's OK. I actually take great pleasure in being mistaken for a male Homo sapien. In real life and/or over the interwebs.
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Ugh...
I um....
you humans... look the same?
Na, got nothin'. Sorry Parasprite.
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It's perfectely fine> I find it extremely amusing when this happens. You shouldn't feel bad! You actually made my day!
I... what? Shouldn't Mikel have woken up on a cloud? I thought he was just getting projected into her body.
Oh. She just... didn't notice that her door was made of clouds......
Too many asides at the end. How the heck did her wings get broken? She was lost for one sentence. That's moving too fast.
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That is correct, he didn't notice he was in Rainbow's house.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.... Interesting so far...
5366532 Cool so far, eh, Cool Wrighter.
Puts on sunglasses.
YEAAAAA
I have to stop there...
I lauged so hard!
I love this line!
This also explains how he got there & why he was in Rainbow's body. It's just Discord having some fun! For the next chapter, I would either do a chapter with Rainbow in Mikel's body, or Mikel running off to find Discord and (try to) beat the crap out of him.
You're doing a great job!
Keep it up!
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(in manly voice, sitting in a nice fancy chair by a fire, wearing red plad robes) Ha ha haa. Yes you did Polka, (takes sip from dose equilese) Yes you did. (takes another sip.) BLEH! Pinkie! You said you poured all the hard stuff out! That wasn't cider!
Do I know you , because the description in the beginning seems to be me, exactly me.
I'm gonna go out on a limb here, and say the home video is Rainbow in Mikel's body. Please say I'm right!
This chapter was awesomely funny. I was laughing the entire time!
Keep up the good work!
But just to let you know, there are a lot of typos. Just sayin'.
The next chapter will be longer than others. You'll see why when it comes out.
Now, I'm not gonna read this story, cuz in just really don't like to read stories like this. NOT saying it sux, just saying it's not what I'm into. But I posted this to say: it's not really my dream to be a pony. I wouldn't like being a pony, apart from what my stories say, I couldn't type, I would only bearabley able to drive and fly airplanes, which is really my dream, I couldn't hold a gun, and worst of all, I COULDNT EAT BACON!!!!
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Nope! Regreat nothing!
Yeah... that was more to make the statement make sense... I am (and was upon writing) aware that not EVERY SINGLE brony would want that. But it just sounded better to me. Also, YESH! Those are some big drawbacks! I do enjoy visiting a human shooting range every once and a while. If you excuse me, I need to go rethink a few things...
5429332 btw, I wasn't serious when I thought you were serious about that. Oh and I wouldn't be able to build my Legos, virtually shoot nazis, watch your every step on netflix... SCRATCH THAT!! YOU WERENT MEANT TO HERE THAT LASt PART!!!!
5429269
Its Rainbow Dash, holding Captain America's shield... and Kicking Hitler in the face screaming "Friendship!" The only thing that could possibly make it better would be er screaming: "Taste the Rainbow!"... or TTRMF if you felt like that. But it still works!
Also, Your avatar!
5429343 Don't forget the M1A3 Thompson!
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Oh Yes! Can't forget that detail! Doesn't Captain America not carry a gun, and when he does its a pistol?
5429352 yep, you got that one. But I just LOVE the M1 Thompson. I DONT CARE IF ITS OUTDATED!!!
I was a bit confused
.... if you could specify who was talking at some points, that would be great!
Otherwise, pretty good!
I is re-reading this and I is noticing lots of spelling errors. Could you please fix?
Very nice. Way better.
Awesome job!
Would you like some critique comments on this story?
this is well written. why so many haters? this stinks...
5569729 me too
Hello, again! I was just re-reading this, and I noticed something, other than some minor spelling errors. You switch constantly from the 'he' to 'she' pronoun. When it's Mikel's point of view, it should be 'he'. When it's somepony else, the 'she' pronoun should be used.
"You were also going 5 miles over the speed limit." The cop said pulling out a pad of paper and a pencil.
You can go 5 miles over the speed limit when you are in a hurry. (Unless your car is red.)
Mikel waited until the cop drove off and dropped his hand on the steering wheel, causing the horn to honk.
It should be head. I thought of the movie RV when the RV was on the peak of a mountain and Robin Willams was rocking back and forward in the driver seat honking the horn in the process.
(Couldn't find the clip.)
Mikel decided to just got to bed.
go
For 30 tedious and painful minuets she was able to learn how to fly, to an extent. Not as fast as the real rainbow dash, but at least she was flying. She walked to the front door of the house, witch she opened and flew out through. Mikel flew for about 5 minuets, at a jogging pace.
You misspelled minutes
"OK! That about dose it! All I need now is some cloud for a potion." She then happened to see her friend (And arguably best pony) Flutter Shy.
It's one word:
Fluttershy
I was wondering if you could get a tuft of cloud for me?" Twilight asked. "But it's perfectly fine if you don't want to." Twilight didn't want to force her friend to do something she didn't want to do.
It's usually Fluttershy that says. Which makes that funny.
"It's OK, I'm perfectly happy to help out a true true friend."
"OH!" Rainbow poped up. "OH OH OH!" She was exited. "The reason time travel spells were so complicated and always fizzled out, was because they were trying to rip a hole in time itself!"
When I read stories I sometimes stop and walk around my room and think. And that was just what I was thinking of.
"... and then she said: I wasn't trying to fix the time travel spell!" Twilight said to Rarity. "She solved a complicated spell that unicorns haven't solved in years! How do she do that?"
did
"Any ways... I need to go see my grandma, but I can't town without telling you about the present, the guilt!" Rainbow lied
town?
She shot off like a rocket, Twilight chased after him.
her
Author's Note:
THE ENDING WAS TO WEAK! It was too weak for the readers, and too weak for me. IT DEMANDS TO BE CHANGED! And so it is.
Changed how?
"I'll be back there in no time!"
3, hours later... (in that voice from sponge bob)
"But... you'de let me DIE! Are you kidding? Please tell me you're kidding."
I have never heard of you'de
Her horn started gloweing again, and aimed it at Mikel.
Glowing
"She'll be fine, You got her here just in time though. This is the hard stuff." Rainbow looked around the bed. Her entire left leg was numb. "She's in rough shape. A star spider bite AND 2 broken wings! If Twilight hadn't found her, she'd be... well... you know..." The Doctor (Put your whovian merch away...
) said.
I was considering that in the first place. I was thinking of the Doctor from the episode Rainbow loves reading.
But thanks for the laugh.
The Doctor
(I HATE THIS GUY! Y does he torment me with not having a name?!?)Mikel, then slipped out of consciousness.Does this make sense to you?
Kinda like this story
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