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Hakuno


Izzy is best pony.

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Heeey, I recognize you~

5305688 Hey there! Didn't think I'd see a familiar face (avatar?) 'round here so soon. =D

5305719 S'where I spend most of my time, actually! :trixieshiftright: I'll have a glance at this soon, I'm sure I'll like it as much as your usual stuff though :D

5305739 Haha thanks for the support. Though I must admit that this was more challenging than I expected, but I'm quite happy with how it turned out. I hope you indeed enjoy it. ^^

Without any delay, Sunset reached the hem of Trixie's top, and she complied, helping Sunset pull out her shirt. Sunset groaned when she had to stop kissing, but quickly forgot it the moment the shirt touched the floor with a soft thud. She looked down with hungry eyes, only to find a weird piece of white garment around Trixie's bust. "What's that?"

Trixie looked down panting, and after but a second gazed at Sunset with an eyebrow raised. "You don't know what a brassiere is?"

Stopped reading here. Sunset's been in the human world for at least three years. There's no possible way she doesn't know what a bra is.

5305756 Aaaand that's why I never try to write comedy... Uhmm you know what? I'm not going to edit it. An error made, a lesson learnt. Thanks for reading though. ^^

A clopfic featuring Sunset and Trixie? My night is officially made.

5305763 Maybe she just has really small boobs, so the utility of it never occurred to her.

5305961 Uh, no. They looked smaller due to the leather jacket she wore.

While i would have liked to see a conclusion as to why Sunset is like this, the story had good humor and romance so i"ll let it slide.

5309380 She was in heat....somehow.

Comment posted by Synthetic Soul deleted Aug 17th, 2015

5305961 5306148 It was intended to be a simple joke. Y'know, the former-pony doesn't know what a bra is... Comedy ain't my thing...

5309380 I was going to actually explain it within the story, but at the I decided not to do it. Although if in the future I feel like expanding this little universe, I might as well explain it. (But don't expect it to have sense :pinkiehappy: )

5309705 Really? Seems interesting then...

For goodness sake that's one hell of a clopfic!

Fucking amazing. :twilightsmile:

Holy Jesus that was amazing. That's all I can say right now.

Sweeeeeeeeet

Trixie closer the space between them (not sure if i'm quoting that correctly since I had to reload the page thrice)

Either way not a big deal, slight grammer error still a. Great story though ^^

Good job for a first clopfic. :ajsmug::pinkiehappy:

5778895 Thanks ^^

Smell of "SHAME"?!? Nonsense! They smell of Sexy Times and Awesomeness! :moustache:

Wow! This is my new favorite clopfic, I loved it! :pinkiehappy:

This gets my seal of approval, definitely. New favourite ship ahoy!

Well done for a first clopfic. :raritywink:

This definitely is getting a like and a fave. :twilightsmile:

Smell of shame LOL

"Don't worry." Trixie said confidently, but her body was shivering in nervousness. "Trixie still owes you an apology…"

Apparently the definition of apology has changed since I last looked in a thesaurus. So it's no longer 'Making amends' but now 'whoring ones own body out'!

Nah, I'm just pulling your leg. Very nice and very well done for a first time clop writer.

Trixie nodded with a grin, and finally finished dressing up. She then looked at the tables and floor, and realized that there was something that needed more priority. "Ok, but I think we need to get cleaned first. I'm pretty sure we smell of shame."
Sunset only beamed.

:rainbowlaugh: lol that story was funny but that last line cracked me up .

NO MERCY!!!

think thats only you trix. sunsets seems proud of herself.

Did enjoy, very nice story.

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