• Member Since 14th Feb, 2012
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A thief embarks on a heist to steal and airship that he had spent months planning on. This is the story of how his perfect heist took a turn for the worst, landing him somewhere he doesn't know and having no clue how it happened. What will happen? Well don't ask me read the story. Also, this is steampunk.

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Steamponies are best ponies.

522158 I approve of this. :pinkiehappy:

This thief seems to be taking this whole Equestria business a little well. Though now that I think of it, he just stole an airship with steam powered turrets on it without batting an eye. I think it's safe to assume he's seen crazier... crazy that may or may not of involved a moose and a room. I look forward to the continued adventures of this brigand. :twilightsmile:

I can imagine Rainbow Dash crashing through the cockpit causing the ship to spin out of control :rainbowlaugh:

535621 That would be quite the disaster, hahaha. :rainbowlaugh:

Just a note, you've got a couple of grammatical errors and some "grocery listing" I like to call it. If you just list stuff so directly about his setting, it becomes less of a story and more of a grocery list. Just trying to be helpful :pinkiehappy: A proofreader would make short work of your grammar errors, there aren't too many:pinkiehappy:

537842 Very well, I shall keep that in mind! Thanks! :twilightsmile:

NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEEEAAAAASSSEEEEE!
FIMFICTION LACKS STEAMPUNK FICS!!!!

Question: How long till the next chapter?

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