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Just your average starving artist, beginning writer, YouTuber, and amateur voice actress

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Sombra wanted revenge on the Galaxianov family, especially Celestia, so he placed a curse on the family. All but Celestia would die within the fortnight. During a siege on the castle, a servant colt helped Celestia and Luna to escape. The girls ran, but Luna couldn't get onto the train. She fell, hitting her head on the cobblestones. Celestia believes she had been the only survivor that night.

An eight-year-old Pegasus filly had been found wandering the streets. She had no idea who she was, or where she was from. The only clue she had was a necklace that read "Together in Maris" and a mysterious scar on her forehead. She was sent to an orphanage, where she was known as Niya.

Now, ten years later, rumors of Luna's survival arise and Celestia offers a large reward to anypony who can bring her sister back. Niya, with the help of two con artist stallions trying to convince her that she is the lost Princess, makes her way to Maris to find whoever gave her the necklace. And Sombra, awakened after all these years, is determined to stop her and put and end to the last of the Galaxianov line. Will the Stallion of Shadow succeed, or will Niya find the family she had always dreamed of?

This story is of no relation to Frozen in a Nightmare, although it features some of the same characters. If you couldn't guess, this is a parody of the movie Anastasia.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 19 )

Meh, I like the concept, but you need to change it some.

5410213 I'm not quite sure what you mean...


5410310 What do I need to change?

5410572 Niya is not Celestia, but she is not an OC either. At least, the character isn't, but the name is original. You might want to reread the description and story, then it should make more sense.

5410213 face it, alicorns are a race. we frankly don't know what happened in the past for there to be a limited number of them now. And this off the bat is an AU story and a complete AU so they can do anything here.

5412327 Glad it's making sense now! I think I understand what Shadow meant. Celestia and Luna's parents and siblings are alicorn OCs because, well, for now, we don't know if the princesses even have any family, but they died in prologue, so...ok maybe I don't know what they mean....

This sounds like it needs a crossover tag... Who is the pony in the story image?

5414099 the first pic is filly Luna, the second is Niya, the third I can't tell you because it will spoil later chapters. You'll just have to wait and see...:scootangel:

I honestly LOVED it. I almost cried when Luna hit her head. I love dramatic stories like this and cant wait to see some more. ROCK ON NERDZ U RULE!!! :pinkiehappy:

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The answer to that is in the prologue...during the fight on the ice.:scootangel:

5454579 oh missed that. but why is Clemintine in the foster service if she can stand foals?

5454668 I suppose she doesn't really hate foals in general, she just saw Niya as bratty nuisance who didn't seem to know what Clementine saw as her place in life. But, I honestly don't know. Int the movie that this story is based off , Clem's counter part talked to Niya's counter part that way, so I took inspiration from there. Plus, in every movie I've ever seen or book I've ever read the foster parent/orphanage owner hated at least one if not all of the kids.

Alicorn OC pic! Imma Downvote!

Just kidding. I'll give you a fave, because this is actually kinda interesting.

I don't see what the confusion is about the alicorn "OC" in the cover art. If people would read the description it's pretty obvious who the filly is. Sheesh.

Anyway, faved and upvoted!

This seems like it is based of the movie Anastasia

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