After literally dropping into another world unknown to me, I find myself getting new friends. The price of this however, is the dangers we face, and the darkness I must face alone. Laughter, kindness, loyalty, honesty and compassion. The five elements of harmony is the foundation of friendship. All of us will be put through trials, and validating the true value of our friendship. I must choose my friends wisely, they must decide wether to trust me or not, and we must all get through this. But where in the hay are we? And will we ever have a day without trials or troubles? Probably not. But I'll try to make the most of it either way!
TL;DR: I'm in Equestria, but I'm always in deep shit. Luckily I won't face it alone... I hope.
And very important: I'm not done with "By the Borders". But when I am, you will see that it is merely an introduction to a larger project I will start with soon. THAT story WILL include canon characters (and some fanon), and it will also be more canon material.
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It's good funny and good
Elimental bears what's next imploding trees
can describe it as much as you much as you want.
Not sure if that's right
And could you please indicate when acorn is speaking/narrating
Aside from that it's a pretty kick flank story
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
32678 I know I took a chance when makin it this way, jumping back and forth between the narrators. But are there a part in particular where I should make it a little more obvious?
And also. I planned to explain the part with the bears at the very beginning of the next chapter to conclude that little detail. THEN the juicy stuff hits the road.
FINALLY done. I will get going on a sequel soon. But for now I just want to relax.
As always, constructive criticism is appreciated.
The story that will follow up on this will come with more canon material and characters. I'm looking forward to adding something that actually originates from the actual series!
Okay, the last chapter was rushed. And in retrospective, the first chapter var kind of ridiculous as well. SO to make up for it I will do the following: I will edit the last chapter to make it less rushed and add an epilogue! And then I shall make an prologue for the next story just to give a taste of what is to come. And I will make it BETTER! BETTER character development, more and funnier moments, plot twists and an ending I have planned since I started this entire thing. I will make more time for this, and I'm pretty damn excited about it!
So now that "By the Borders" is done, I'm in a better position to make a good story!
(And it's gonna be awesome)
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36629 What?
32786 Apologies for not replying to your comment earlier with the fact that it made my day the day I read it!
220760 I didn't really think of any elements at ALL when I wrote. Could you explain a little further as to what your point is, since it's been some time since I last wrote in this fic?