While exploring an abandoned spaceship Dinky comes across an interesting article in it's databanks. Her father's a murderer. He destroyed all of Gallopfrey, the home planet of the Time Lords. With the last shreds of seeing her true home going up in flames, Dinky runs away...Gallopfreyan Style. TARDIS humming under her hooves, she shoots off into all of space and time.
Author's Note: This is the second story in the Pinkie Who timeline. Read Pinkie Who before this story. Chronologically this story's a prequel but it's written as a sequel. Don't complain if you're confused because you didn't read my warning.
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It also had a setting for wood.
This made me crack up.
Overall a fun beginning, and I'm looking forward to what happens next.
YEAH! It's here!
Couple mistakes:
Should be "is"
"million"
Yeah! Prequel-sequel of stuff! Yeah!
Oh boy! This is gonna be good! Just one question though.
Did you intentionally reference Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, or where you just looking for a scientific way of saying "we're here"?
for the first time in history.... i am ashamed of dinky doo.
5306247 Hitchhiker's. Love that book.
5306825 Oh?
5306926 dinky is amongst my favorite of the backround ponies, that being said she never even gave her father the chance to tell her his side of the story. she left her father and mother in pain do to her pride and irrationality. don't get me wrong i read pinkie who and i knew it was coming but it doesn't make me feel any better. it's nothing agianst you just perosnal dissipointment in one of my favorite characters logic.
5306924
Whew! I was really hoping that was an intentional reference!
Keep being awesome!
5306931 I understand. I had a hard time writing that part because she needed to be irrational in order for it to work. It was especially hard because I wanted to write Dinky as a mostly logical pony. A kind of opposite to her father. The only thing I could think of is her panic and just her dreams being crushed. That she spent all her life looking for a planet that was destroyed. Not only that but her father was the one to push the big shiny button.
5305033 prequel, sequel and probably side story at some point
Wow, Dinky, for shame. Not only did you leave your parents somewhere and somewhen they don't know, but in your bid to use a phrase you know your dad wouldn't use, you used one a different regeneration of his used.
YAY! Finally a story that makes dinky a timelord! I hate it when she is adopted or his step daughter. Can't wait for more!
the corridor became narrow and lead to a door
so they weren't going to have a radio to decode the information being broadcast
The lever moved hallway before it matched Dinky's strength
1. Led.
2. Isn't it; Broadcasted?
3. Halfway.
I still wonder what The Doctor would have said if given the chance to explain. Would he have said that the Time Lords were planning to go on a universe sized genocidal rampage as portrayed in the show? We will never know. And we who read the seed story, the 'precursor' in a sense, know her fate. Makes you sympathize for her being so young and making decisions like this on her own.
5309752 Yup. You will never know. I know, of course, but it would just be speculation as it would probably change the course of this story and the next.
Because Time Lord children are more fun than Time Lords.
An excellent start for a very promising story. I look forward to seeing where this ends up. Maybe we'll get to see a sort of River Song esque character for Dinky's next regeneration. Would be fun to see the Doctor blush while seeing a pony version of his wife in the other universe.
Overall a very good story I loved it I was laughing at the reference's to hitchhiker's guide.but I apologize in advance for my nit picking. The TARDIS is a livening being and yes you did reference it but there is no way that dinkie stole her.The TARDIS would eather not dematerialize or shut down.Again this is the tiniest nit pick it is still a good start
5461343 Oh? Why would it shut down or not dematerialize?
5461431 well in the past the tardis has been shown that she can control what she dose for example in the episode the doctors wife when the tardis is in idris's body and the doctor was criticizing her saying you never take me whare I wanted to go whare the tardis responds by saying no but I all way took you whare you needed to go. Oh and I apologize if I went overboard with the nit picking
5461481 I'm just confused is all. It's true that the TARDIS does have a bit of control to the point where it can override the Doctor at times, but not always. As for bringing him where he's needed, Dinky needed to be brought to the beach and grow her own TARDIS. It is a fixed point in time as it needs to happen so the Doctor will meet her in Pinkie Who, and thus have the knowledge of the future to stop Derpy in this point in time.
5461514 OK I get it I was just a little confused as well sorry for all the troble
5461544 No problem.
5461551 like I said before good story and fantastic characterization and amazing story telling you are a fantastic author
5461563 Thank you!
5461568 no thanks needed you disserve it
This still being done or is it dead?
6206112 It has a sequel.
Will this continue?