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BrianBlessedPony


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In a small cottage outside of Ponyville, two males fight for the want and affection of one pony they both care about deeply...

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#2 · Nov 4th, 2011 · · ·

This... is the definition of Epic. Especially that last line! (Why are there no happy shy ponimoticons? )

Awesome sauce. :eeyup:

24692 :yay: :yay: :yay:

You were saying?

24680 Thanks!
24692 Heh, thank you! I wouldnt say its that good :derpyderp2:
24718 Thank you!

Lol I love the little incident with Big Mac and angel! Well done, write on!

*applauds*

2011? Wow, can't believe I never saw this one.

It was already an adorable story, then Blossom showed up. Good show. :rainbowkiss:

I love your vocabulary. I'm younger than most writers on this site but that doesn't mean I don't know the English language. And thanks to you I can add more words to my mental thesaurus. Good story, too. :yay::heart::eeyup:

Sharing a glance, neither rabbit nor pony had the courage to look at Fluttershy. The pink mane pony on the other hoof had one simple thought floating through her head.

‘Should I tell them that I know they fight every morning...’

Lol!! :rainbowlaugh:
Great story have a mustache and a 'yay'! :yay: :moustache:

Very good story, I loved the twist at the end

:yay:

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