After being picked on, and teased at work. Derpy becomes self-conscious. Can her pals cheer her up before she does anything rash?
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GMSK758
Just a nerd who loves ponies, Gravity Falls, Steven Universe, and Legend of Korra. Uhhh Derpy is best pony. Mabel is best Pines twin. Pearl is best gem. Korra is best avatar.
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So you probably didn't except for her to cry in the first chapter. But the others were pretty mean. Anyway, I hope you liked this short first chapter.
Muffins are boss!
5288340 So far, so good.
It was a good read. Some minor spelling and grammar issues but it didn't detract from the overall story.
Keep going!
Desiring more
More more more!!!!!
please?
Hope anyone reading enjoys this chapter. Personally I think this is my favorite out of all three chapters right now.
5418235 Was this comment supposed to be funny? Because it is.
This story was good, but was missing an editor.
5493570 Well thank you for saying it was good.
Hehe I don't really have an editor. But I promise I'll go over this one and fix it.
AW! This is so dark and cute at the same time, like totaly adorable!
Okay just letting you know that I think you meant Angel also if this is truly the doctor, cannot see him using angel as any form of endearment given the experience with the weeping Angels those things terrify me