Just a casual Brony who ventures out in the artist side from time to time. A little writing and a little drawing here and there.
Steel Arrow was look to make his own way in Equestria. He decide to move to Ponyville to try out his luck.
This part of story is about his arrival to the town and craziness that ensue. A certain yellow pegasus mare catches his eye. He befriends the local farmer by the name of Big Mac. Big Mac also has his eye on the yellow pegasus too. Will their friendship survive when they learn they are after the same mare. How far will the go to win the war for the love of mare.
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love the story so far
if you want you can set you'r chapters to password then get preread
INB4 Twilight and Big Mac seeing things out of context and overreacting!
Okay i know that there would be a couple of grammatical errors. I don't have any one else to edit this for me. I did my best, but I will fix the errors every one has point out to me and re up load the story later this weekend.
Thanks for the input. keep it comming
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Thanks for the feed back. I do the best I can with rereads, I do wish I had another set of eyes to go over my fiction before I post it.
I don't know why you would think steel looks like Phoenix Wright. But, now that you mention it, he kind of does. I guess the artist I commissioned took some part from the that game and the pony I generated from Deviant Art.
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You'll see in Chapter two after I fix the middle part of the chapter.
I would like to apologize to everyone who read the story before today. I put up the wrong file. Here is the right one with a second pair of eyes looking at it.
Much better! I await the next chapter!
The herd is pleased with your work.
I am here to give you one interwebs and this message:
The herd is amused, you shall live...for now. 
And now, I, the herd's humble messenger, sign off!
Godspeed you magnificent bastard-BlazingShadowBrony
Well Chapter two is finally up. It was a bit longer then I expected and bucking hard to write at some points. So sorry for the long wait.
I also did just some minor word changes to chapter one.
Enjoy
FullMetal Alchemist much?
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Just a little it set up for another arc.
Wow, he's got rotten luck with breaking things! Guess he got lucky with his special talent
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Eyupe
Excellent
Yay I wuv thus story sooooooo much
I am reading this thinking "Oh, this fic seems like it will understand how much I hate FlutterMac shipping but how much I do like both their characters".
I swear if this turns into a 3 way relationship....
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Thanks that great to hear.
Hopefully I can get the chapter up soon. It is that I am graduating from college and the past month has been pretty packed.
Plz!!! Hurry up with the new chapter I am going to die if it doesn't come out soon!
DashieFan1 is out,PEACE!!!
I think fluttermac should just stay!
DashieFan1 is out,PEACE!!!
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It is coming its coming, and with any luck it should be done soon.
I'll explain more in a journal post in just bit. Just hold on for just a bit longer 
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