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During his birthing process, Kit a changling prince mutates into something else. Though he shares the changling form, he doesn't behave like any other changling. He doesn't feed like them and he doesn't have a connection to the hive mind. He is shuned by his mother, Crysalis the changling queen and is kicked out of the hive. He soon stumbles into Canterlot where heis then captured by the guards. Join kit as he learns to survive in a world where he is considered a monster as the Moonlight Knight.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 66 )

506133 Well then, I post second!
At 1:35 in the morning, no less! I need to go to sleep, I have work in the morning...
Looks good! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

The only thing that irks me here is the Your/You're problem, for example.

"Your thinking about him aren't you sister."


This should be "You're thinking about him, aren't you sister."

But this seems really interesting otherwise. Fav'd to keep check of this.

Cant wait for more need more must read must read or I'll die

507637 I need 10 cc's of trancralizers stat. Where's the nurse, what do you mean she's on break go get her now. What she quit, god damn it. Stay with me bro, the next chapter is coming soon.

S'not bad. Why'd you cancel hope? I wasn't able to read the blog post cuz the site was being a dick.

507769 It was too much for me. The story was bland and the charcters sucked. As for the post I deleted it. You can read the others if you want.

I"m gonna read all of hope eventually. But I was just curious. i have 40+ chapters to read in my favorites. lol.

507980 darn it I'm not first. oh well glad you enjoyed the chapter as much as me

Hey bro I like the title and all but I still think it would've sounded better as The Lunar Night. But still great story and I can't wait for more. Oh and bro keep up the good work

508039 That would be copying a vidio game by that name.

:pinkiegasp::yay:508104 omg you heard of it YAY. I have the game in question.

hm i feel our young hero has made a fangirl

YOU! YES YOU!!!

YOU ARE AWESOME, AND YOU SHOULD FEEL AWESOME!!!

great chapter in a awesome story. keep them up man :D

508720

1. the plot thickens

2. celestia damn cliffhangers

3. i fucking love this story

4. SECOND!!!

First block :P

Second block :P

Triple threat Third Block. Deal with it. B)

this is good. keep up the good work.

It's a good read. Good job.

:ajsmug:C-c-c-combo Breaker, Sixth B)

damn man you be making some awesome shit:rainbowdetermined2:

looking forward to the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

have kit have a accident like twi did, fueled by her magic.

512904 Thanks for the great idea.

513128 :twilightoops:no magics? no!!!!!!!

513256 as a side temporary effect

another good story my friend. I don't like the chapter's being so short, but there enough in them to be worth reading.

I love the noir aproach bro. keep up the good work

514473 Stay tuned for a new fic. It's a Fairy Tail crossover

514503

first. all the rest of the chapters, this was great, plz write moar

second. fairy tale? as in the manga fairy tale?

514606 Yep, Though it takes place before that. It's still in development so please wait. Also I always try to write more, but then I think "Might as well end this chapter now I continue in the next chapter with another cliffhanger." Though I apologise for the short chapters. My little Fairy Tail will have longer chapters I promise.

haha... -hears kit's head bouncing off steps and dies laughing- Another good chapter, though short. I have the same issue. no worries.

I dont mind short chapters because it allows for story building time. I have the opposite problem i make my chaptrrs too long and then.my mind goes blank for weeks. I also dont want to upload anything until i havr at least three chapters so im stuck.:fluttercry::moustache:

Another good chapter. I hope kit kicks the piss out of those other three changelings.

Way to go Twilight and Celestia couldnt just leave him alone

Kit: What is the point of life. All we are, are some insignificant carbon based lifeforms, floating on a hospitable hunk of space rock in a black void. Everything is and was a creation of a random mistake. What is life? what is death? But some cosmic joke.


Twighlight: It doesn't have to end this way.

Kit: What is a man but a miserable pile of secrets! Enouph talk have at you.

first and that was awesome

also: curses,*raises fist* cliffhanger again!

Cliffhanger!!!!!! damn you!!!!

-marcus fenix' voice- Nothin' but bits...

*locust voice* such a pretty mess.

A short chapter so don't complaine

even if it's short, it's still good. The length doesn't matter, it what you pull from a chapter.

Yay an update. Can't wait for more:yay:

Hmmmm things just got interesting:duck:

568496 Heres your reword

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