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Genesis2014


Writing stories has been my hobby ever since I can remember.

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Godzilla Junior falls in love for the wise and beautiful Princess Luna. Yet his doubts worries him. Does he deserve to love at least once? Would Luna love him as well? Junior must step out of his comfort zone and admit his feelings, hoping for the best.

NOTES:
1) Godzilla Junior is owned by Toho. Luna by Hasbro.
2) I give a great amount of thanks to Tarbtano for letting me use his version of Godzilla Jr. Yes it's the same character I'm writing about here. Also thanks to him for the proofreading and corrections.
3) This is NOT a chapter from or for "The Bridge." Rather yet, it's a fanfic based off the events and characters of the story.
4) Enjoy my first story!
5) Any image used here I DO NOT own. All fanwork of Godzilla Jr. and Luna belongs to their rightful owner. Great work artists from DA!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 83 )

I like it so far.

5286102 Thanks! Means alot.

I approve of this so far. Dialogue can be a tad awkward here and there, but still very readable and a great effort. :twilightsmile:

*faves*

5286994 I'll review it one more. Thanks alot!

Lunilla lives on thank you sir

What ho, a Lunilla fic? Based off of one of if not the most successful Godzilla mlp crossover fic? Hmm, looks like a spot just opened up on the top of my "read later" list. If it makes it to my "Favorites" list, is yet to be seen. Expect to hear from me soon.

Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.

5292457 I'm glad you're up for this! As perphas the first Lunilla fic, I hope you'll enjoy it. I welcome suggestions~

5293540 Have a Fave You URNED IT get it urn? Chirp chirp chirp everyone's a critic.

5314156 Nice one. XD Heads up! Chapter 2 is close to come!

5316499 Looking forward to it.

5316509 *Brohoof* Intensifies.

ATTENTION READERS: I need anybody (or anypony) to help me proofread my story. I'm not a fluent English writer so I need a good English writer to help out. I really wish to improve this story in any case! Message me if you're interested. Thanks!

Did i get some thing wrong? Or is Canterlot her close to the ocean?
Is Goji less clueless in this Fic as he is in the original? After all it looks like he understand this feelings, and the behaving of Blade Dancer around him.
I just hop you don't start to bash Blade Dancer only because you don't like this paring. (I don't hate the Paring Blade Goji, but are myself more of a Luna Goji fan. But as a Charakter Blade Dancer is one of the really better OCs.)
And i need to thank you, without your Story I never had start to Read The Bridge XD.
So time to go to the next chapter ^^.

I like this Chapter, but I'm still confused about Canterlot and the shoreline, I thought Canterlot was on a mountain not to close to a Ocean. Or did i get some thing wrong?

"So he likes Luna huh?" She thought to herself. "That flirty voice he made. I probably taught him too well." She let out a small laughter. "Very interesting."

I think i see here a new matchmaker (right word?) XD. And another question, is this after the Fight in Canterlot (where Goji shows his true form to the whole city? Or before?

5324921 Good questions, about the shoreline, I say it's outside of Canterlot. I would imagine Equestria near just by one ocean. That's just my view. To be fair, I ain't going to bash Blade Dancer. Just have her along the story. Not revealing what I have planned. I say this story takes place after the fight on Canterlot. Glad you checked out The Bridge! It's an amazing story.

5325322 K, I was just confused abut the shoreline, because I thought Canterlot is located on a mountain ^^.
That's the Question, is the country Equestria or is the continent Equestria, and what is the planets name XD?
Glad to hear ^^. Ok, I just think that it will be hard for him to find friends in the city after his fight. After all, it doesn't matter how accepting the Ponys are, many of them probably will fear him cause of his true form I think. And he will need a friend there. Or I just think ponys are to much like Humans XD.
And yes it is a really great story ^^. again thanks for leading me there XD.

5326397 Oh just use your imagination on those questions. XD That's the beauty of our minds. Anyway yes it's maybe scary how Goji Jr turns out to be to the ponies but they gotta admit that he saved their souls. If Tarbanto decides to do Tierk vs Goji, I PUT MY MONEY ON THE KING! Anyway thanks for the comments. :3

5326800 Ok ^^, My mind is not beautiful, it is broken, twisted and full of Chaos. AND I LOVE IT XD!
Sure thing, but fear often wins over the mind ^.^
Well this bet will be an easy winn for you. " IN THE RED HALVE WE HAVE TIERK WHO CAN DESTROY A TREE WITH HIS ATTACKS! AND IN THE BLUE HALVE WE HAVE THE KING OF THE MONSTERS! THE ALPHA PREDATOR! SON OF GODZILLA WHO DESTROYS ALL OF JAPAN WITH JUST WALKING OVER IT HER IS GOJI JR! LET THE SLAUGHTER BEGIN! XD Yes this would be a short, brutal but still funny thing XD
No Problem ^^

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5326846 Lol man x'D my mind is happiness, bunnies and flowers and rainbows :'3 okay Goji! DEATH MOVE DEATH MOVE! KILL HIM. KILL HIM. KILL HIM

NOT RELATED TO THIS STORY

Hey guys, after this story, would you want a destructive Godzilla/MLP story? I'm kind of into the mood for a dark 1954-style story.

5346415 A Grimdark Godzilla/MLP story? Oh yes please.

5353028 would you like to work with me?

5354624 Oh yes. Yes, yes, and to top one off...YES!

A really good first chapter! I LIKE!

Another good chapter! Although a little short in my opinion. Lol. Keep it up!

5361067 Thanks! Chapter 3 will be out soon! I'm taking a little longer because I want to add more than 1,000 words.

5362838 to you and all! I welcome suggestions! But please pm them.

THIS STORY IS NOT DEAD

I'm almost done! 900 words! But I need some help! Suggestions and tips are welcomed!

I was half expecting Goji to sing "A Whole New World" to Luna.

P.S. Make That Happen!

Well, not only I see the night now, but everyday, anytime actually. Just by looking at you Luna, I see the night's beauty and wonders."
Luna smiled, but she smiled cheerfully and merriful. She closed her eyes, leaned toward and hugged him, "Thank you!"

DAWWW! The FEELZ!

5397964 I guess my work is still good xD

5405297 thanks man! I just had a hard time due to such and such stuff.

I really hope you continue this story. It has a nice story for a spin off, the characters are presented well, and it is just enjoyable.

5435962 No worries! This story will be continued and finished. :scootangel: Surely I am delaying alot but that's because I don't simply wanna write whatever. Thanks for the positive review!

Something tells me Blade Dancer isn't going to let go of Goji that easily.

Wow really like this!

ps: Im making a Godzilla/MLP crossover too! Summoning the King of Monsters

I also wanted to say the LunaxGoiji pairing really rocks! As I was writing my own story i was contemplating on just how much they have in common, and I tottaly ship them :)

Stars part 1
stars part 2

5409777 NO NO NO NO NO NO NOO! THAT'S NOT HOW YOU DO IT This is how you do it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b-XhyLqC344 :coolphoto:

You need more chapters! but don't hurry. so far I've love it! :twilightsmile:

5691636 Thanks for the kind words. But I don't get support or help of any sort, I'm afraid I need to cancel this story.

5694898 Hey now! If you want I can help make this story. that is if you want.

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