Wolf Shade is an earth pony stallion with an unwanted past. Raised in the Everfree forest Wolf Shade has become unknown to the world. That is until now when he rescues three 'crusading' fillies from harm. This story will lead through many feelings and tear jerking love for a princess and a first friend from the Everfree for Applejack. Let me know how I did and don't forget to tell me how shitty I am doing HA.
P.S All Editor credit goes to Parchment
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Chapters (3)
5289906 yeah I thought I fixed thoughs but thanks. I just yhought of it yesterday to be honest.
5289924 Aye Aye
5289927 actually if I were you, I would do a rewrite on this. It's a cute idea, but your execution needs a lot of work. And if you're wondering what you need to work on then here.
* your first chapters way too short
* your change in scenes is to messy
*have a bit more meat in your fairy tale story
*what other main six talking about. We're literally jumped into the conversation, without clue
* and grammar, I shouldn't be talking about grammar since my grammar is terrible
you should talk to this guy for help,aurora borealis. This guy is super helpful in giving writing tips.
5290044 sir yes sir. Hahahahaha
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If you would be so kind!
5460212 I would but I hit a conflict of interest on my next chapter
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All chapters will be fixed including my newest chapter all editing credit goes to Parchment