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It's a bit fast paced and all-over-the-show but I like it nonetheless.
Keep up the niceties!
A trick that helped me on my stories was once I have finished a chapter, I would reread it a few times and then edit it and upload it the next day to make sure that I got in all of the details like character descriptions, surroundings, and making sure that there were no grammar errors. Just a thought.
You definately need to mind your pacing.
You could probably triple the word count if you did.
Everything the last three said.
Yeah, everything else is fine.
YEAH!!! i like it!!
It is very interesting.
Thank you all for the wonderful feedback! I will be sure to work on pacing and all that the next time I update this, but I have no idea when that will be, please don't kill me if I don't update this within the next month. Inspiration comes at random times, and so does the motivation to write. But again thanks!
I like it a lot its a good start to a fine store.
but like the others said pacing is a little to fast.....made a little more time to flush out ever thing would help
I'm not the most app person to give good or bad revews but this store is worth finshing I thank.
I hope u have fun and I look forward to seeing more of this store and mean more to come.
Update?
5601269 This is where it can be tricky. So far, I have no great ideas on how to continue the story, but when I do get inspiration, I will update it. This story isn't complete and I will continue it eventually, until then, I'm so sorry but you will have to wait.
5615038 That's okay, but you should probably mark it as on hiatus, though.