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As a changeling, Cyril knows what Equestrians think of changelings.*cough, specist, cough* but when he gets lost on a hike, and captured by Princess Celestia herself, she knows he has a LOT to say, and uses that to her advantage. He then is being Questioned. Will he keep his cool? Or will he freak out?
Or neither?
My first fic, hope you enjoy it!
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Wat?
Are changelings like dogs or cats and scratch themselves with their back legs?
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This made me laugh... I didn't notice until now. Do you think I should add the anthro tag?
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LOL opinions are like buttholes: everyone has one! Seriously, can you write anything other than an F-bomb? If your critisism was constructive, I would give YOU a chance. Go bother someone else!
Me gusta tu historia, es buena pero tiene un par de cosas que no terminan de convencerme:
Primero: los capítulos son en general muy cortos, no es que diga que este mal pero como ejemplo el capitulo 2, 3 y 4 pueden estar perfectamente en un solo capitulo.
Segundo: ahi unas cuantas cosas que son muy forzadas, por ejemplo llamar a la reina Chrysalis y que Cyril se convierta en un sirviente de Celestia.
Pero todo eso aparte disfrute de leer esto y quisiera seguir leyéndolo (I'm too lazy to write in english).