• Member Since 27th Oct, 2013
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Jay David

Just a guy who loves MLP.


When Fluttershy's friends find out that she's become interested in a certain, burly farm boy, they try and help her in overcoming her nervousness in approaching him.

However, naturally, the world "help" is being used in it's loosest possible definition here.

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Comments ( 38 )

Very well written,nice

Big Mcintosh knows how to handle business.

Adagio knows the moves

Good job, there. Just one thing:

That was all the proof applejack needed to confirm her suspicions, though it did little to sate her confusion.

You might wanna capitalize AJ's name there.

This was adorable. I haven't read Fluttermacs in a while due to fear of death from cuteness overload.

You used the expression "facepalm" and made it work. It's only November and Santa Clause magic is in the air.

Rainbow hanging in Applejack's trees again....

This really deserves more views! Keep it up!

Very cute little short fic good job.

5299832 Are you following me around or something? I see your name in the comments wherever I go. :rainbowderp:

I loved how everyone was just appearing on her farm.

You really could've put Morgan Freeman in there though, eating a churro.

*Sigh* What a shame...

Oh, this is just too adorable! :yay::heart::eeyup:

You have to admit: Fluttershy and Big Mac make a cute couple; Fluttershy and Applejack have a potential at being sisters-in-law; and Rainbow Dash would be a good big sister figure for Fluttershy. :twilightsmile:

If you ask me, I'd chose Sunset over Adagio when it comes to dating advice. She's had more experience with her "Flashy." :raritywink:

I needs more :flutterrage:

Dis reel kewl

5304094 Where did you get the icon for your avatar? What does the writing in it say?

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

This was hilariously anticlimactic. Good job

Short yet sweet story. Nice job! :twilightsmile:

...How did I miss this?

Where has this story been all my life!!!
I'm a die hard Fluttermac fan and thing this story is amazing!
I'm thinking that the sequel( if you choose to make one( please!!!)) Is their date and the aftermath of the date.
Have a like!!!:ajsmug:

5305691 I think I got it from dA. And the writing is just the URL of the creator.

Keeping do these dude I love them!!!

To help me read through this story, I am now picturing the narrator as a character... I'd rather not say why.

5303585 He could've narrated this himself :rainbowlaugh:

I like this story and its continuity from 'A Problematic Romance' :pinkiesmile:

So Mac says he overheard the whole thing, which means that he wasn't spotted within earshot even when Rainbow Dash was listening in at an elevated position, Adagio approached from behind the other girls, or when she and Fluttershy did their "demonstration walk".

Freaking Apple NINJA. :eeyup:

I'm in a bad mood and this just made me happy :D

Heh, this was a cute story. Great job!:twilightsmile:


Nevermind why I'm here!

Plot convenience is convenient, and I am completely ok with that. :ajsmug:

Well that de- escalated quickly.

just here to...admire the apples! Yes, that's what I'm here for!"
Applejack never liked to think such things about her closest friends, but she always knew a lie when she heard one

Technically, she didn't actually lie. She was there admiring an Apple after all. :raritywink:

I'm not really a Fluttermac fan, but this is fantastic. :raritystarry:

Never question the sudden and timely appearance of Adagio Dazzle, :duck:


I have LONG since abandoned questioning anything related to ponies. When you think too hard about cartoon logic, well... you end up like this one.

This was hilarious to read!

Aww, how sweet. :twilightsmile: Adagio was starting to give some pretty bad advice there, glad somebody stepped in. :twilightoops: Thanks for sharing! :pinkiehappy:

This is probably a stupid question, but I'm terribly naive about such things.

Fluttershy is a drop-dead gorgeous girl. Aren't most drop-dead gorgeous girls very confident that they can get anyone they want? You know, kind of a "hapless male, come hither!" thing? I've been scorched by a beautiful girl and it's just hard to believe that a girl like Fluttershy would have difficulty approaching any boy.

But like I said, I'm naive and have been scorched. I guess that colors my perception.

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