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When life gives you Lemonade, make Lemons. Life will be all like, "what?!"

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Mr. Smarty Pants is Twilight Sparkle's childhood doll who protects her from the monsters that hide in the darkness of her bedroom.
What she doesn't realize is that protection... comes with a price.

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Comments ( 14 )

I think he's going to eat her.
Very interesting, good idea, overall:
1000000/10

I'm nitpicking here.- But Smarty Pants is a girl not a boy.

Other then that, the story is very creepy.

Reminds me of a few stories I've read in books over the years, One most above all called Mr.Hands.

Similarly This toy too would protect and later haunt the woman through the years.

Also I'm getting hints of this fic reminding me of Mr.Widemouth lol.the creepypasta.

However you cut it, Hoof up, Fav'd and followed.-Might even add this story to my Must Read Blog as well if it's ok with you.:duck:

5888228 Oh yeah I would totally be okay with that, thanks! :twilightsmile:

SQA

I was certainly spooked. A very fine tale indeed.

The description reminded me of this.

Congratz!- I've spotlighted your fic within my blog.

I hope it brings you in more viewers, and great job on such a chilling tale.:raritywink:

Creepy as fuck. Liked and Fav'd.

Just the kind of story I like. Well done.:heart:

Ey.

I pre-read this.

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Wow! That was creepy, very creepy. A like and favorite from me! :raritywink:

back when creepy pasta was vague.

also, this is the fist time a haunted doll made someone go sane

Wow... I like this, very creepy well done

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