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Shahrazad


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It’s Pinkie Pie’s first Apple family reunion. Too bad she doesn’t quite fit the mold for an Apple. It’s alright, Applejack will help her out, by telling her what she needs to do. Exactly what she needs to do, or else!

Edited by: Level Dasher
Cover Art by: Norm

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

I could see this as an actual episode. And I know AJ's upset her dog's sick but I take issue with her for the fact that she blamed Fluttershy.

What?! This here is yer fault?! What were you thinkin’? Puttin’ chocolate in an apple pie! That’s jus’… criminal!

How was this Fluttershy's fault, AJ? She wanted to veto the chocolate. I know, I know. Projection.

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This story is a little more personal than I'd like to admit. Thing's I'd never say normally just seem to tumble out when I'm angry. AJ's doing that here. Is it rational? Hell no, but anger rarely is.

5278544 Oh yeah. That I get. So does Fluttershy. If someone I loved was badly hurt, I'd blame somepony for the sky being blue. We all have our coping [defense] mechanisms and I believe this is how AJ would act. Awesometastic.

That said, must resist urge to rip her head off for tearing into Fluttershy like that.

It's an okay story, but you could dial it back a bit with Applejack's reaction. I mean I can understand being angry because her dog nearly died, but AJ isn't vulgar or hateful about the truth. Only thing that bothered me. I have been that angry, but AJ is good at restraint unless lines have been crossed. (Discord crossed that line.)

5280214 Yeah I kind of agree



Anyway I enjoyed this story very much, it was worth my time :pinkiehappy: :yay: :ajsmug:

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