• Member Since 17th Mar, 2014
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Red Cedar


Applejack fan and avid roleplayer.

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Fluttershy has changed. She can see it. She can feel it. And it scares her nearly to death.

The only thing worse than what she has become, is what she has to do to keep it under control.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Love it. Flutterbat is back. For more.

You could add more chapters though, see what happens when winter does come. To see what thing, or pony she decides to kill next.

Very well written. You've captured Fluttershy very well here.

Wow, this was amazing! :pinkiegasp: Why did I not read this story earlier? :pinkiehappy: Fluttershy's narration was really great, she still being Fluttershy herself. Also, this story was actually surprisingly intense as well. Very good job! :rainbowkiss:

Nicely done although it was short.

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