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I write fanfictions. Obviously. And I do a bit of my own original stories. I just haven't got them written down yet.

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Ashlan is the deadliest assassin in Tamriel. He was caught by the captain of the guard, and put aboard a prison ship to Skyrim. That should've been the end of it. But after a renegade dragon attacks and leaves the ship a splintering wreck, Ashlan finds himself in Equestria, the newest province of the empire. Inhabited by the 3 variations of Equestrians, along with numerous other species, it is not yet fully settled by the empire. With this knowledge in hand, Ashlan sets out to make a new name for himself, for away from the Empire's eyes. Still, nothing is ever as easy as it sounds, and Ashlan will face obstacle after obstacle trying to fit in to this peaceful land. And yet, Ashlan may find that his particular skill set is just what Equestria needs when the Nightmare cultists rise to shroud the land in eternal darkness! This the story of Ashlan, who's tales will be sung by the Bard's throughout the ages.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

Wall of text. Space out paragraphs. I won't thumbs up until it's fixed. Grammar needs some serious TLC also.

Otherwise, it's a good story.

Good story, but you need to fix one thing.

Example:

This is your paragraphs first sentence. You forgot to indent.

This is a regular paragraphs first sentence. It is indented.

This actually sounds like an interesting idea for a story, however it obviously needs the AU tag and I'll reiterate what's already been said regarding brushing up the format of the story.

indent paragraphs, use the hr tag, and grammar.

needs thalamor and celestia as it is obviously cannon that the thalamor hate anything that has more magical potential then them or one of them in general. they would try to learn their secrets of magic by any means necessary. so, BRING IN THE THALAMOR

Yay, I am the new editor and I shall help Dragon! :3

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Also, how do you sugest things to the admins? 'Cause I plan on asking them to make a way to add a person to editors and it will credit them and in that story only say net to their name Editor

Also; people, at least I dunno SAY why you dislike this! I mean, its not like DragonTech can't fix it!

5294754 YOU REALLY LIKE TYPING LIKE THIS

5326155 Hatty_Hattington: Don't make fun of my editor, or I'll hire the Wind Drake Society to take you out. If he wants to type like, that let him. Unless you are an editor, you don't know what it's like to be enthusiastic about a story to defend it. If you are not making fun of him, then please don't post comments like that. If you are, don't post them either way. if you are an editor, congratulations! Thank you for considering this opinion, and have a nice day.

Sorry everyone, i'm still waiting for my editors to get back to me on Chapter 5. Both it and Chapter 6 are written but need to be edited for mistakes. I promise the moment these guys are done I'll post them. Oh, and apologies to Hatty hattington for my little editorial rant. The important thing is that you looked at my story.

This is a great story, much better than most of the Elder Scrolls crossovers I've read.

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