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gchamp89


Best line ever - "You can shine no matter what your're made of."

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This story is a sequel to Spike Gets Rarity Wet


Rarity does something that really ticks off Pinkie Pie

She confronts Rarity about it.

And then she issues a challenge.

I lose control of the story from then on.




(Thank you everyone who has supported read and/or given advice for my first story. I am still learning so I still will appreciate any advice you can give. Also I will try to work on my grammar a bit, but sometimes I do get too excited when writing.)

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Comments ( 3 )

This has the potential to be really good or really bad. The ball is in your court, all you have to do is take the shot.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Some missing and wrong words (Your - you're , can - cant ) and so on, FIX IT !:facehoof:
Gee Thanks for supporting Sparity:moustache:
Breaking the 4th wall ! Keep it coming ! Great concept,:raritywink::moustache::twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy::rainbowhuh::ajsleepy::flutterrage:

Pinkie you are one sly pony not on my level but really sly

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