Glad to see this story again.

Moved from deadfics to tracking and perhaps eventually back to favorites. Time will tell. :3 In any case, glad to see it updated. Few grammatical errors here and there but nothing major. Might look for a proofreader if you have the time. :3

Some transitions look off, when he is thinking about training sindel's guards, suddently it changes to him in the room, many authors use visuals cues to show when something stops.

aside from that the story a-okay, kudos for the MKX reference.

Great chapter. Glad to see this story is still alive.

Yay! Update!

Update pls

can u explain this whole dream scene to me cause I fear I have lost track of what was going on

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Glad to. The dream itself was a creation of the Hellfire used to compose Scorpion's Body. That Hellfire, while giving him a nearly unlimited amount of power, isn't without drawbacks. Part of the drawback is to be able to tap into torture and torment that is happening on the Spiritual Realm. However, when Scorpion was under Quan Chi's control he was never able to see the soul of his wife or his son. Instead he could only hear her calling out for him. Thus it was his own torment which Quan Chi had devised as a means of keeping him under control. If he didn't even have the solace of sleep to slip into then he would understand that he was completely beaten.

Once he had broken Quan Chi's control he was able to interact with things he couldn't before. It was thanks to Luna's influence that he was able to find the soul of his wife, kill the curse placed on her soul, and free both her and their son, so that their souls could pass on.

Hope that helps.

RJP

6509114 ok that dose help but what about the scene lunas first husband thing was that just part of the curse or did that rely happen

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That was something that had happened to Luna ages ago. It's basically a nightmare Luna occasionally has, and most often there's no one she would share it with. Scorpion was drawn to it because of the Hellfire that composes his body. Luna's dream was full of torment and suffering. While it was happening the Hellfire did what it would normally do, and guided Scorpion toward the realm of spiritual suffering. So, did it really happen? Yes, but it was long before he appeared there.

6509225 ok thank you for telling me and i will say this i do not like that idea at all cause one i hate abusive relationships with a bloody passion and makes me VERY angry ( not at you though) and two cause luna is my fave pony