Well I think we can all agree she's a awfully talented pony! Twilight does what she wants! Jk. I tried to make sure I got rid of most of the humanizations but I guess I missed that one. It's fixed now ^-^ Thanks for pointing it out!
Ok, I really liked this one. Found one typo, even though I was really looking for them:
"Despite the pain, it was good, oh so good, and she didn’t want it to stop. He"r" hips once again began to buck involuntarily, her sensitive pussy craving ever more stimulation."
I know what you mean but Twix? lol I shall read!
Edit: Oh ya and...
FIRST!!!!!
BTW... how'd she "grab a handful of rose petals" without hands?
Well I think we can all agree she's a awfully talented pony! Twilight does what she wants! Jk. I tried to make sure I got rid of most of the humanizations but I guess I missed that one. It's fixed now ^-^ Thanks for pointing it out!
I have the puny pebble of the third?
Not much Discord action 'round here. Nice to see the old man get some spotlight.
Discolight clop...now that's something you don't see everyday.
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I guess it was
*Puts on sunglasses*
Sparkly
Although great story.
at first i was like da fuq? now I'm like down boner!
Thanks for all the positive feedback, guys! I'm really glad ya'll enjoyed it ^-^
After reading these discord fics now i gotta go watch those episodes. Well written by the way 4/5 moustaches for you
Nice tie-in to "Lesson Zero"!
I had intended it to be a oneshot, but if ya'll would like more I'm happy to provide it if I can come up with a good idea.
Ok, I really liked this one. Found one typo, even though I was really looking for them:
"Despite the pain, it was good, oh so good, and she didn’t want it to stop. He"r" hips once again began to buck involuntarily, her sensitive pussy craving ever more stimulation."
The first DiscoLight clop I've seen. I was all like most of the time.
i like where this is going
This is positively one of the best clops i've seen when do you plan on attaching the next chapter?
I've seen worse, that's for sure.
On an unrelated note: Does anyone else see Twicord having a 50 shades of grey theme to it? No? Just me? Okay...
I'm sick... I don't like clopfics, but I'm desperate for discolight.
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! Am I the only one who wanted to be in Twilights spot? I think I am. BUT I DONT CARE!
Third Discolight clop I've read and so far, it's my favorite.
Ouch. I am so going to follow this.
2314185 I did too and imma guy
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Uh....
Not to be rude or anything
...but...I...I can't control myself..,,
D,, DISCORD SENPAI ISH MINE!