Luna, I beseech thee...

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As Luna dreams, she’s forced to review her own psyche.

A plain of blackness, holding naught but three cages and one coffin, all filled with one occupant each.

She looks upon them with regret.

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MrCellophane

MrCellophane #1 · Mar 31st, 2015 · 1 · ·

I enjoyed the concept of this story. Certain individuals have unique ways with dealing with change over time, with past selves, or with past choices. Getting a glimpse into the mind of Luna as she deals with self identity and forgiveness is intriguing.

While I personally don't believe in Fausticorn to being the mother of Luna and Celestia, clashing of OC vs cannon, I can accept it when it is pulled off in this subtle way.

While I would have liked to have seen how Luna deals with her inner demons, I mean, inner selves, the story is still complete in its short execution. I will admit though that the ending looked a bit rushed. But that's just me.

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