As Luna dreams, she’s forced to review her own psyche.
A plain of blackness, holding naught but three cages and one coffin, all filled with one occupant each.
She looks upon them with regret.
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As Luna dreams, she’s forced to review her own psyche.
A plain of blackness, holding naught but three cages and one coffin, all filled with one occupant each.
She looks upon them with regret.
I enjoyed the concept of this story. Certain individuals have unique ways with dealing with change over time, with past selves, or with past choices. Getting a glimpse into the mind of Luna as she deals with self identity and forgiveness is intriguing.
While I personally don't believe in Fausticorn to being the mother of Luna and Celestia, clashing of OC vs cannon, I can accept it when it is pulled off in this subtle way.
While I would have liked to have seen how Luna deals with her inner demons, I mean, inner selves, the story is still complete in its short execution. I will admit though that the ending looked a bit rushed. But that's just me.
5803997 Even by my standards it is a bit rushed, for that I'm a bit annoyed.
Oh well, when I get better, future stories won't suffer as much. As it stands now, I managed to write a story, and I like it.
Thanks for the critique my good sir!